God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen

Just a history lesson since this topic sux..
just a reminder what Christmas is really about.
I aint religious, but I grew up wit religious
Grandparents so as kids, this was all I was told.
N’ its time to use it, because Christmas has
Been thrown way out of proportion over the
Past years…………………………..so remember..

.. Behold The Birth ..

A virgin un-preparing, for the baby she didn’t knew she carried
A vision constantly staring, at the glowing white that spoke to Mary
A change upon her day, listened intent to what was next
Agreed but had no say, in the babys’ purpose, name or sex
A night never missed, for the birth of the lord of hosts
Showered with gifts, from three men, wiser than most
The meaning not understandable, from the star they saw
Bent over were animals, n’ a wooden crib filled w/ straw
Screaming Mary, a babys’ voice, a look to the truth
The angels’ rejoiced, as they lived the book of luke
Passages read in heaven, God has his own accord
Quote Luke 2:11

A slave to have heard him, from death to his revival
Under the New King James Version, spoke words of the Bible
No fat man, no sleigh, no reindeer.. no gifts, no elves working in labor
Only a group of people who came here, to witness the sight of the saviour
Frankensense, gold and meir.. the gifts people continuously miss
Mistaken sense, before it were.. before Christmas gifts filled the 25th

.. Behold His Teachings ..

Jesus spent no time waitin, but neither did satan
As he pressed temptation, for temptation to greaten
Never mistaken, Jesus objected, a discouraged Lucifer departed
He was human, but though subjective, He prayed to God whole-hearted
That’s when it started, no zeus or heira, or thinkgs of material
So that started his era, of good deeds, healings, n’ miracles
The wisdom of the man, lead to mistaken reality
Until he touched his hand, on sick men from Galilee
He chose 12 men, and never went anywhere without them
He knew he’d need them, when he took 5 fish n’ fed 5 thousand
Cured what was terrible, did what he was called to do
Preached his parables, n’ teachings to the multitude
He listened and heard, uplifted his best
Taught of the word, n’ predicted his death
His future’s mind enabled, but he had enough turned
Visions of men in betrayal, cross n a last supper

.. Behold His Fate ..

A Son of a virgin, n’ another to a builder
That’s when judas turned in.. his life for some silver
Romans ended their search, But peter drew his knife
Jesus calmed his worth, though he served his life
Peter slit the guards ear, revealed the blow
But jesus, despite his fear, healed it so
He seen his life visibly, n’ never missed the weak
As judas got in close proximity, to kiss his cheek
“Judas, are you betraying the Son of Man with a Kiss?”
N’ with this, they slapped cuffs upon his wrists
Trial he stood, knew the day, cant bring it down
But he knew to pray, n’ strayed from the chants of the crowd
Let the people talk, n’ the cursings be tossed
Let the thief walk, n’ handed the messiah the cross
Walked down the street, standard prevailed
Strangled his hands n’ feet, with hammers n’ nails
Some couldn’t watch, Just to disgust to the core
Their fires hot, for the spilled blood of his pores
A hill bled three, one that begged for his wronging
Men turning weak, n’ one wanted his own belonging
The criminal was content, now he wasnt scared to die

Taunts w/ no reason, not to bring of the news
Pierced was Jesus.. “KING OF THE JEWS”.
As the situation worsened, he handled his business
For the people that hurt him, he begged forgiveness
He would be the last to die, as it was written
As he looked to the sky, “It Is Finished”

.. Behold the Beholder ..

Christmas morning, remember the roots
This is a warning, to remember the truth
You know the story, believe or you guess
But before god rests ye marry gentlemen.. Remember why that ye rests..

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this was a great piece, everything flowed decent and the feeling was perfected. this piece spoke nothing but truth. I was really feeling everything. Perfect timing for this sort of piece. Great job Aus. Keep it up.

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The Creation

this piece showed some good imagry
contained a lot of depth and some good multis...
which made the flow nice...
kinda long... but ur emotion kept me reading...
not your best...but pretty good

Good topic
Nice usage of words
Flow was perfect
Very interesting to read
Enjoyable .........

Once again....
Great peice Auspicious

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I didnt really like the topic, a little too deep for me. Other than that the actual writing was good. Seemed more poetic script but still nice. Lots of creativity. Decent piece. Stay with it

topic was kinda eh
flow was on point
vocab fluctuated well
nice imagery
good structure

and metas had me like whoa

showed some real skill in this...a well written piece......but i hated the topic.....you handled it well though...pZ

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It Was For SS