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Old 11-29-03, 06:20 PM   #1
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Who Said I Was Gangsta (Off LP)

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Who Said I Was Gangsta?

Its Time To Clear Up This Circulation That Was Based In Constant Determination..
For Those Hatin On My Own Personal Relations That Greaten To Make Me Make A Statement..
So Face It, I Aint Gangsta So Forget It Cuz..
Only Reason I’m Gangsta Is If It Was You who Said I Was..
Told Ima Fake, A Phony, A Never Was To A Never Been..
Never egotistical To Run The List Of Emcees Im Better Than..
So Forget It Then.. I Don’t Get Calls Hittin Me Up For Crack..
I Don’t Even Gotta Cell.. Weed? Yeah I’ve Sold A Few Dubs Of That..
Im Broken, Money Wise, Stomachs Lie To Tell You I Don’t Put Twists Of Emotion..
So Hopeless, So I Don’t Sell Drugs.. I Smoke Them’..
Yet Focused, Focused On What Im Good At, Focused On Whats Proven..
I Don’t Roll Strapped.. Its Endicott, You Fuckin Stupid?
If A Knife Is Necessary, Then So Be It..
Is It Needed To Be Treated Tryin To Rap When Someones Bleedin?
Yet I’m Lenient.. n’ I Aint Never Been Shot, Never Been Stabbed..
But Never Mentioned All The Times In My Life That I Could Of Had..
So Shove That Back, Enuff Of This Crap.. You Wanna Be Tough, But That Pre-Dominant Tense..
Get Jacked Then You Know What Robbin Meant, Stop It Then, Shit That’s Common Sense..
Fake Thug, An Illiterate Punk Like I Cant Type To Spell..
Been StereoTyped As A Thug So Much, Thought “Might As Well”..
So Hell, Lemme Break This Down A Lil More See..
I Didn’t Portray No Image That Ya’ll Didn’t Portray For Me..
So Ya’ll Bore Me, Boring Stories Like People Complainin To Be In Their Mid-Fourties..
So We Don’t Support These Warnings, Just Watch Results Of Rap Tournies..
So Sometimes In The Mornings, I Don’t Question If These Problems Are My Fault..
It Aint My Fault That Ya’ll Fall On Account That You Cant Stand To your Own Results..
N’ When Ya Cant Catch Ya Pulse Its All False.. The Advertisment Of Life..
Speechless Despite, You Find Yourself Saddened That Im Right..
N’ You Wanna Know What Happens In A Fight? You Face Allegations..
Charges Pressed, Larger Mess.. Deadlines Set Yet You Fail To Make Em..
So Then You Facin Jail Time.. Getting Out Soon? Lawyer Will Doubt It..
Finally You Get Released.. N’ your Only Motive Was So That You Can Rap About It?
Stressin Bullshit Progressin Before Tension Is Mentioned That Make Impressions..
So Who Said I Was Gangsta? That’s A Retorical Question..


I Don’t Claim To Be Suttin That I’m Not..
But Drop Hot When You Ridicule Me For Suttin I Got..
So Stop.. Side Corner Rasicists Hate My Style Un-Simplistic..
Cuz I Sag My Pants, Wear Hoodies n’ My Walk Is Different..
Ya’ll Still Stressin Over That?
Agreed, If You Wear A Du Rag n’ A Backwards Baseball Cap..
But I Don’t Roll Like That.. How Is A White Rapper S’pose To Dress Then?
Would It Make Ya’ll Happy If I Walked Naked With A Pressed Pen?..
To All Those Who Ask The Question.. Heres Ya Flaws..
Want A Hint To My Raps (listen closer) .. Eat A Dick n’ Grow Sum Balls!..
If Rappin Is Gangsta.. Then I’m O-G..
If ya Lyrics Are Garbage.. Don’t Say You Know Me..
But If Ya Label Lookin To Phone Me, Proceed..
I Hustle Kids For Dimes n’ Nickels, I Don’t Hustle For Crack..
I Rap For Rhymes n’ Pencils.. Bout Time Ya’ll Know That..
My Lessons Vary, So I Will Beat You If Necessary, Heres What Im About..
Knock Ya Teeth Out When I Breech Out To Reach Out..
N’ Give The Muther Fuckin South End Of Your Mouth A Beat Down..
Reach Round Pull Ya Asshole Outside In N’ Make It Breath Out..
Freak Out, Heart Of A Thug I Got That?
Fake Gangsta This, Fake Gangsta That.. How Bad Do You –
-Honestly Wanna See A Gun Cock Back?
I’ve Stolen, I’ve Lied, Faced Enrollement, Beaten Kids Up..
I Lived What Needs To Be Lived Up, N’ You Aint Lookin So Tough, What!?..
That’s Enuff.. Sit Wit Me A Minute.. Would You Like To Say You Own A Nine So You Can Rap?
Or Get Clowned on The Fact Cuz They Know You Don’t Own That?..
Figured You Would Have Known That.. 16 years, There’s Been A lot To Witness..
But Why Bother Explainin It If Everyone Just Says “No You Didn’t”..
Popped Pills, Taste Haze, Lived Through Those Who Died..
Been Shot At, Chased By Cops, n’ Even Took A Stab At Suicide..
So Who Am I, Who Am I, Who Am I.. A Gangsta Within You n’ I..
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Old 11-29-03, 06:26 PM   #2
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Old 11-29-03, 06:27 PM   #3
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this was a good piece i liked the flow and the creativity of the lines, i've never read anything like that good drop hit hard, you had some really amazing lines too good piece...could you hit my battle or my open mic its in my sig thanks amn pz
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Old 11-29-03, 06:28 PM   #4
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That Is Some Good Reality Shit I Liked From 1 Line To The Last....

10/10
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Old 11-29-03, 06:36 PM   #5
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itz great man really good to see someone wit similar feelin's toward the same topic. Def deserves to be put down in a track.
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Old 11-29-03, 06:46 PM   #6
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Thanks Uppin
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Old 11-29-03, 07:13 PM   #7
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That was awesome, great flow and lots of creativity

10/10
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Old 11-30-03, 12:16 PM   #8
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Any Better Crit?
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Old 11-30-03, 09:45 PM   #9
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Yo That Peice was Tight Kuz Keep that shit dropping......i have Herd that ur maken a CD and i think ya will go good wit it.........
Aiight Peae Kuz 10/10
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Old 11-30-03, 10:11 PM   #10
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Damn that shit was ill cuz....There really wasnt no mistakes in it. The whole thing was hard.
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Old 11-30-03, 11:23 PM   #11
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Aus, You Did It Again My Man. Another Dope Piece. Not A Damn Thing Wrong With It. Flow Was On-Point, And I Know I Say This Shit Alot, But Flow, Along With Content, Makes The Piece Either Great Or Garbage. This Was Mos Def Great. Creativity Caught My Attention Too. Structure Was Good, When I Read This, Shit Flowed Right Off My Tongue. You Impress Me More And More With Every Drop. On The Real. . Let's Drop A Collab Sometime Man.

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Old 12-01-03, 05:32 AM   #12
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Your text LP? lol
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Old 12-01-03, 11:38 AM   #13
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nice verse dawg.. i enjoyed reading it from the beginning to the end... 10/10

great piece.. keep it up..


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95629
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Old 12-01-03, 02:57 PM   #14
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Forumla Is Tha Only One Who Has Given Sum
Positive Crit Worth Reading.. Come On.. Damn
Wheres Cam or Maven When u Need Them
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Old 12-01-03, 03:51 PM   #15
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creativity and flow were on point...as were ya vocab and content...not really much else to say...nice drop fam...keep doin' ya thing my white friend...lol...
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