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Old 01-18-04, 11:02 PM   #1
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last time by dilousion and controversy aka- 4-1-2

IP: C1DA C961

Verse 1: dilousion
my temper is short and I cant hold it back
well be goin to court cuz I will give u a fist smack
cuz ull make me tort and then I will crack
and the blood u will snort after my attack
because u think I look funny and is a whimp
but u know what sonny ur are the shrimp
and u want my money yes im a pimp
but u wont get it and u cant even get on my shit
but im still better and ill pull my nine and ull remember
beatin me is like pitchin a no hitter or getting with ur babysitter
Ill be like bang and u wont know a thang
I took it easy yes it happened the way I sang
But u deserved it talking in ur shitty slang
no i aint gonna do time cuz u got on my case
and this is small ass crime i only fucked up ur face
but ur a weak ass motherfucker so now im in jail
but who gives a shit soon ill be out on bail

Verse 2: controversy
PEOPLE LOOKIN AT US WITH OUR PLATINUM
THEY BEST NOT LISTEN TO 50 CUZ IF THEY PULL A STUNT WE GON' CLAP THEM
PULL OUT AN AK, 9, OOZIE AND A MAGMUM
WITH MY FULL CLIP U SHOULD PUT YO HANDS DOWN AND RUN
YOUNG'N
WE IS GOIN HEAD HUNTIN
WHILE BLUNTIN, YOU SHOULD OF THOUGHT BEFORE FRONTIN
ITS NOTHIN
FOR US TO PUT PEOPLE ON THERE HINEY
WITH MY JEWELS SO SHINEY
I GOT THE SUN STANDIN BEHIND ME
WE A FINE G
SPORTIN GUCCI, THREATENIN PEOPLE TO SHOOT ME
CUZ IT'S JUST A CRIPS DUTY, SO DON'T POINT ME
CUZ THERE BE NO POINT G
TO POINT YO SHIT AT ME
IT WONT BE PRETTY
WHEN I CLAP U IN THE MIDDLE OF YO OWN CITY
WE CAP YO DOWN TO THE NITTY GRITTY
WE AINT BE FEELIN NO PITTY
DON'T TEMP ME CUZ IT'S JUST TOO RISKY
BITCH PLEASE
DON'T PLAY AROUND WITH OUR SEMI'S
U FUCK WIT US U BEST BE LIKE DIDDY AND RUN YO CITY
PIMPIN HO'S BEIN STRAIGHT UP HUSTLA
I MAKE ERY ONE SCARED SO FUCK BONECRUSHER
SMOKE UP WEED, SWALLOW X, SELLIN THE YAYO
FUCK WIT US AND WE SPRAY YA NO
KILLIN KEEPIN A LOW PROFILE SO NOT VERY WELL KNOWN LOCAL
BUT U BE PURPIN U GETTIN A BULLET HOLE FO SHOE
UH

Chorus

IF YOU WANNA FUCK WITH US
ITS UR LAST TIME FUCKIN
YOU TRY N MAKE A BUCK
BUT YOU AINT BUCKIN
YOU THINK U CAN STUNT
BUT YOU AINT STUNTIN
YOU THINK UR SUMTHIN
BUT YOU AINT NUTHIN

Verse 3: controversy

WE COMIN HARD BURNIN THE ROOF
KNOCKIN YO TOOF
ANYONE GIVIN SHIT BE GONE WIT A POOF
WE 2 SMOOOOV
U FUCK WIT US UZ A DUMB MUTHAFUCKA
PRETTY SOON ERY ONE GON' BE SEARCHIN FOR US ON KAZAA
WORD TO YA MOVA, AND FAVA, AND YA DAUGHTA, AND YO BROVA
LIKE L I'M A BIG MONEY GETTA AND A BIGGER LADY LOVA
FUCK MY BABY'S MOVA
CLIPS ARE FULL
WE BOUT TO RULE
THIS EARTH TODAY
COCK BACK AND PULE
WE GOT A HOLE
GOIN STRAIGHT INTO YOUR FACE
JEWELRY IS STOLE
PEOPLE ARE FOOLED
WE GANKIN YO SHIT ALL DAY
WEAPONS ARE GONE AND CONSOLED
NOW I'M UP ON PAROL
THE EARTH GOT LUCKY TODAY
BLUE JEANS PLAIN WHITE TEE, IM FRESH
MAKIN MONEY, FUCKIN YO WIFFE, OUR LIFE IS THE BEST
WITH A BOTTLE OF CRIS IN MY HAND IM FEELIN REFRESHED
SPRAY CAPS ALL BY THE HUNDREDS TO RELIEVE MY STRESS
U NO WE BE CAUSION CONFUSION
U NO WE BE DRAWIN CONCLUSIONS
AND IF U LOOKIN FOR SOME HITMEN, CONTACT ME AND DILOUSION
MOTHAFUCKA

Verse 4: dilousion
You all walk around not knowin how to act
You always keep looking back
Cuz you don’t know when were gonna attack
We needed somthin good so we came to ur shack
And you tried to sell us some fake ass crack
allyou bitches shouldn’t have ever crossed our path
Cuz now we’ll have to kick your ass and let our guns blast
Cuz sprayed and layed on the ground is the punishment payed
You tried to wave the white flag but its to fun makin fags gag
Don’t get me wrong I like the front stage but aint afraid of the front page
You should never messed with me and my shinny 12 gauge
You should be happy, I coulda left you six feet deep
But six feet high you still walk your feet
But don’t get happy this time was only a pistol whipping
Cuz next time it’ll be a nice ear slitting
And we all know the charm comes the third time
Ill use your gun cuz your life aint worth mine
As I ride away in my 24 in rims bens
Me controversy and the rest of my friends
Are drinkin and smoking the finest as ur life ends

CHORUS:
IF YOU WANNA FUCK WITH US
ITS UR LAST TIME FUCKIN
YOU TRY N MAKE A BUCK
BUT YOU AINT BUCKIN
YOU THINK U CAN STUNT
BUT YOU AINT STUNTIN
YOU THINK UR SUMTHIN
BUT YOU AINT NUTHIN

IF YOU WANNA FUCK WITH US
ITS UR LAST TIME FUCKIN
YOU TRY N MAKE A BUCK
BUT YOU AINT BUCKIN
YOU THINK U CAN STUNT
BUT YOU AINT STUNTIN
YOU THINK UR SUMTHIN
BUT YOU AINT NUTHIN

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Old 01-19-04, 12:25 PM   #2
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Old 01-19-04, 06:50 PM   #3
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Old 01-20-04, 09:05 PM   #4
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Old 01-21-04, 02:37 PM   #5
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This was alright.....but lose the caps, it hurts the eyes lol....structure was ok, could be fixed up a bit from both of you.....flow in this was alright, it fell off at some points i thought, in both parts....vocab could be up'din this a bit i think...but overall this was alright....keep at it.
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Old 01-21-04, 02:38 PM   #6
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Long and dreadful(That's why I didn't read it all)and like ^ said please lose the CAPS!!!
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Old 01-21-04, 05:29 PM   #7
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