http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=97220
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=97111
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=97209

The end of evolution won’t come with time but pollution
Retribution for killing the planet with toxic diffusion
Our contribution has evolved with us over time
Advancing minds advancing chemical, acid and alkaline’s
Pumping poison into the atmosphere causing cancers
And global warming drawing the tides higher no time for gangsters
Too many cats busting raps on girls cars and grabbing flaps
The worlds in relapse its losing the grasp, needs turned around
The knowledge was found its profound why this shit still happens
Evolution gives the ability to learn, creating new contraptions
So do you really think it’s a good thing the way we’re going
I’ll leave it open, you decide, and I’ll keep on hoping…..

good shit

good flow and vocab

good topic, u hit it hard

keep this up man, i dont see why its being slept on

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this was excellent work you displayed true talent but made it so short other then that you did excellent work here

Yeah i agree this was a good drop here....everything seemed good i thought....Your structure was nice like usual....vocab in this was pretty good as well....flow was on point, stayed on through out it really...overall this was a good drop....keep at it.

This was a good artistic pz I knew exactly what your point was and where you were going with it. Very good imagery and I agree wit u one hundred percent. You have different line lengths wich causes the structure to take the flow down a notch (im not much better but you got to keep workin at it) So on a scale from one to ten you get an 8, -1 for structure, -1 for the shortness of the pz. Okay I'm out, post on hate-hate relationship for me. pz

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish

decent dopic
flow was good
id like to see you do more with this topic

decent drop

flow was on mostly

multies felt forced at times

vocab fluctuated

good shit

this was A good Piece...had Nice strucure Like all His Other open Mics That I Have read...Ya Made it Nice and short It was a Relief because every one's else's Are Very Long...Ya flow was Nice because it stayed there constantly...I liked the Topic very origenal...Keep Flowing Kuz Peace (v)


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it was ight u need to elevate on your punch lines and vocab wordplay was ok multis alright flow was alright just keep up at it