8-10 lines
no d/r hate votes
no group votes
30 mins

you spit first.

check in

Fuck i will go first then.


Heres a list of some shit you should probably know,
one your a bitch, and two your a hoe.
think you can hold a gun to my face and I'll let that shit go,
I'll turn that gat around havin your momma scream "NO!!!"
I ain't scared of you, you a hooker from Miami.
Men give you a dollar thinkin your a goodlooker named Bambi.
Only difference between u and that deer is u eat dick for candy.
Death to me, naw mother fucker Death to you,
to beat me ur gonna have to get serious,take off that skit and high heel shoes.

*his pic is a guy holdin a gun
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haha....nice drop.........blah........checkin in...........
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nice quick key.........


Youz nuttin' but a Fake Ass Gangsta stay talkin' rough
but after this battle you won't be able to walk or strut
Beat off ya limbs, fuck you up then stomp my feet off in tims
U bleed hard ta live, no screams cuz ya throat was snipped
What a Joke This is, i sit back an let my lyrics choke this kid
And you prevoked me bitch?,U still sittin home in hopelessness
Try'ta Cope wit this, here's ya 3rd loss now let me grope his bitch
Quote tha diss,didn't think i'd take ur integrity when wrote this shit
Thinkin you can't beat me you must be just that dumb......
Cause like a midget jumpin' Shaq...I'm to much to overcome

good luck

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technician took this one...no beef but he just had better punches and his shit flowed smoothly....e you just need to elevate more....stay away from predictable word choices when you rhyme....
hey tech could you vote on this battle?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96117

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Yo breakdown...

Punches: Tech
Flow: Tech
Creativity: Tech
Vocab: Tech
Enjoyment: Tech

Overall: Tech

Tech merk'd this kid, fuckin' one sided. E-Lude, ya jus' need ta elevate...u ain' bad, wit practise ya can become pretty damn ill...

Hit this up, plz, bein slept on hardcore...thx dawgz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2550#post962550

yo technician u up in my crew right? check-in up in da crew forum you can hit it up in my sig............................................... ...............

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flow/tech
structure/draw
style/tech
personals/tech
punches/tech
meta/draw
multi/tech
open/tech
closer/draw
overall/tech
my vote/tech

Tech got this by far....he had better punches, wordplay, and a better structure and vocabulary.....no need for a breakdown...Tech got this by a landslide...no hate to either of u though....good read...just a vote....

peace
4:20

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my vote would go towards tech he had this so far and by far most of it was his.....Anyhow we need to see more complex votes going on!