Verse 1:
Danger, danger· has got me stepping like a Power Ranger
calling on the power of the One from the manger in anger,
but not in sin, I begin, to make my way thru all of this mess I’m in
It’s hard to see so many born faster
got hate oozing out’em like sulfuric acid
everyday a new thief, today’s, might want my teeth
to string them all together and make’em into a wreath
Brother’s ill, and won’t think twice to shake his boom pipe
even if I run the jewels, he’ll still want my life
Puppy’s sick, gotta shoot the gospel quick
and hope the truth will hit him much harder than a mule kick
I let him know that if he lets the hollow points spray
God’s got a vengeance that’ll make a flambé
But let me shut up before I provoke the "cack, cack!"
wish I could do a kick and put him on his back
not to make him handicapped, but so that I could get away
and have another chance to pray
that this brother would get out of the Maddness

Chorus:
What do you do when life’s a must
but you already caught the rush
money, power, lust
In whom will you place your trust
All sin, no question, no doubt
Stuck and you can’t get out
Christ knows how you feel
So get’em up in the air if you know He’s real!

Verse 2:
Caution, caution has got me turnin’· tossin’
pausin’· six million moves, Steve Austin
Check the picture·here comes that madd, fly, dime sister
guess she’s sittin’ waiting for her loving money mister
I wonder if she’s got time to hear the plan
I see her lips say "Her comes this corny preacher man"
I try to strike one up, I say, "That skirt is fly, is it pleated?"
She said, "Man beat it!"
I said "Why is that the greeting that I’m given?"
She said "Step!", I said "God Bless your soul and keep livin’ "
And as I walk away I wish there was something I could say
to really make her understand that she’s more than a Chick-fila’
Piece of meat to be bought or sandwich to be made
cause a little mayonnaise won’t change how your played
Cause the next man bites· and the next man bites
and when it’s all over it’s a terrible sight
when they are done pulling up everything, at the end of the night
You got substance, but float around the bowl like
and God’s got a flush for all the manure
that’s why I’m trying to tell her, to keep her out of the sewer· of the Maddness

Chorus

Verse 3:
Power, power· has got me lasting for another hour
trying to stay alert, awake to the devourer
Though his fate must drag o The Dragon· Satan been hawking
to destroy me ever since I was a little man
And even though I know I’m sealed for the long ride
he tempts me to feel the pleasure of the dark side
It gets raw hide in obeying God’s will
the power is in steady spittin’· "It’s Written"· in his lying grill
And if he wasn’t enough to shake roll and rattle
the world is another enemy of constant battle
They invite me in, only to disown me
build me up to break me down, till I’m lonely
Lastly, I war with myself the most,
Today will I play dictator or will I play host
Will I do what I hate· or hate what I do
or don’t do what I should, or deny what I know is true
This is the ceaseless, keeping it real, kinda war
not only am I a conqueror but I’m more
So tell my three enemies that God’s got the back of his buddy
So I’m going to my grave with my knucks (Knuckles) bloody
Not in the physical, but in a spiritual kinda baddness
cause I gotta fight the Maddness

Chorus

your wodrplay is awesome i didnt like the pwer ranger line to much but you played it well so ill give you kudos.....
need a little more complexity in words...content was decent but could come bettr.
all and all given a hrader topic i think you would excel. stay up and always elivate.
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thanks for the feedback...appreciate it like you wouldn't believe...so many sleepers....but yeah..bout to hit your stuff up...thanks...anyone else have any thoughts on this piece?

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yea cuz it was ok....thats pretty much it...you tried too much

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ye i agree don't try to hard just let the shit flow