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[Diligent.]
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How can you ever be Diligent
If you can never Deal A Gent? Well. . . My source tops everything like Ketchup I'm Like one legged whores Sex Struck Next Up.. Is Hip Hop I no doubt. Top Tips Becuase I'm Tip Top Sock Hits Like Calvin IN-Klein to my album I'm A-Row-Sing Like Dramatic Arguements A-Stat-Tick Bars due.. Like Marked Electric Pot Writes Angle to get Sharp Connective Larks Rejected I Run This Like Paula Radcliff.. Crossed With Mauraice Green . . . . . . A Bawler To Have This Going Further In The Shortest Never Did-Saw Words Sor-Did I've Wore Bibs.. So no one downs my front Does one no how to stunt? I'm there Like Evil Kenevil. Seemingly Effortless Like Sewing Machines I'm Twister The Way I'm Blowing My Scene Yet keeping on the ground Your reaping potent sound Like its grim.. Mics My Whim Then Flip it. But. .Whims Might Scim Skills develop so the Winds Writing I'm as happy as Can Be You see what a Bee Can. Do When you see Pot Plan View So. . . . . Do as you Do Don't Do what they Do Do your Do Like Shockwave I'm Like Iraqees I RockRave |
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IP: CEA5 B505
nice flow..original structure which worked well...
You had dope wordplay here..nice Calvin Klein line...good vocab as well..played well with such short lines..... I like your original structre compared to this..but it was good...keep the shit up. |
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IP: 261B 829D
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IP: 7B47 7A87
The flow was nice, you should try another topic or make your lines longer. It was a good concept, I liked your use of words. Keep writtin!
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