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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
12-06-03, 05:21 PM
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you don't know me
IP: 34BF DD77
yo i'm tha new man , fresh young nigga in tha hood
some know my flow , and they say i'm good i'm fresh wit this new beat , and you gonna fill my heat fuck me you don't wanna fill my shit don't look for trouble man , you'ill start to struggle so don't play wit my flow ,cuz i'm new in this game  |
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12-06-03, 05:27 PM
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted...
But this was ok....but you should make your open mics a little longer than just 6 lines maybe like 10+ lines so....try to keep your lines around the same length....add multies to this to help the flow though...but overall this was ok...just elevate and keep at it. |
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