My Replies:
breakin/Double-o-seven
Get on the mic/Deva
Angellical R/I cannot die.....

INTRO
People are hated, baited, and uneasily sedated, in their mind overrated
Think the world's against them, Think everyone's jealous cuz their the gem
Their wrong, and the road of error their on is long, To understand read the song

Hate-Hate relationship, happens when you shoot from the hip
Don't think about what you say before it slips thru ur lip
Leads to a stressful day, like hit wit whips, cuz ur heart quick flip
People want to love you, But in the end everyone claims fuck you
Being in ur head is like a loud zoo, ur the catepillar tuckd in the cuckoo
ur psychies got u thinkin ur loved, when really ppl want 2 merk u wit hands gloved

CHORUS:
Hate-Hate Relationship, Every body hates You
Claim you hate them wit the next rip, Nobody likes you
Your mother despises you, Damn and she birthed you

Hate-Hate Relationship, Happens when you let your responsibilities lack
Claim to love ur children, need them like air with out em your wack
Last time you saw your son, was when he came into this world 1985
His hope of seeing u had died and is done, hate in his heart be thankful ur alive
This year he graduates from high school, only plans, not 2 b like u and he'll b cool
All the shit you missed damn ur a fool, this soon to b man shoulda been ur crowned jwl

CHORUS:
Hate-Hate Relationship, Everybody Hates You
Claim u hate them with the next rip, nobody likes you
your mother despises you, damn she birthed you

Hate-Hate relationship, happens when you live for the love of money
Only way ur happy when ur bling-bling equip, and on ur arm an iced up honey
when the looks fade away, stupid expectations like a fire hose you spray,
Puts out the fire like a fireworks display, and sends the hot love on her way and u pay
You stand in the hallway stupid on repossession day, thought u could have it all w/o debts pay
Now you claim to hate the world coming to actual, the world hates u and that's factual

OUTRO:
I hope now you have a basic understanding, or have I traveled into a land
That is ruled by an intelligence ban, Why a hate-hate relationship happens and when it can
I'm tired and this rhyme is expired so for the night my writing is retired
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OK I FUCKED UP THE STRUCTURE BAD BUT WHAT DID YOU ALL THINK OF THE VOCAB USAGE AND THE TOPIC AND THE WAY I PRESENTED IT?

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish