Alright, battle rules-

roughly 1 hour to post
8-12 lines
blind spit

good luck man

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

good luck to u too bro.....im lookin for some beginners luck lol..im checkin in ..the 100 charcter thing is gay though

Here we go its this my first edition/
so meters stop your crying and stop ur bitchin/
you wont be beatin me what a pity/
ur death will be slower than diddy ran the city/
u battling me ur career's goin south/
me beatin u is as ordinary as my dick in ur girlfriends mouth/
believe me bro im as annoyin as a blister/
you dont believe me fine..why dont u ask ur sister/
So as this battle comes to its conclusion/
i suggest u go to the hospital..cuz ur goinna need a blood transfusion/

Cut off ya Oxygen supply until ya heart shatters and you comply/
To hang like a flag on fourth of july, without the women's network ya can't survive/

You're traveling the wrong path when ya wins are indivisible by math/
I'd equate this battle to slaughtering cattle but it's more like veal 'cause bitch's only a calf/

How can your name be of architecture when ya structure as fortified as a Tyson-led lecture/
Tyson's wife?, merked you worse than he decked her, now ain't that a painful conjecture?/

Spitting Gazeebo down the middle with lyrical axes like he was made of tree branch/
Fact is you have the chance of survival of a fire-infested Ahmasson Ranch/

n00b should learn the RB ropes, starting with the one that chokes/
This battle's a hoax, smoked this herb so deeply i can even hear Bugs exclaiming "that's all folks!"

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

nice post bro....do u have any suggestions for me? i got no shot in this battle ////////////////////////////////////////

uppin this for some honest votes. please give me some suggestions along with thta vote if possibl please

yo please lets get some honest votes for this battle //////////////////////////////////////////////////

if i were able to poll vote i would vote for meters he had better overall punches and some good imagry along with wordplay... gazeebo u need to elevate a little. but not bad for your 1st time
overall-Meters

can ya'll return the favor and post honest votes on my battles, they are being sleept on.. i will be back to poll my vote when i get 100 posts..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96977
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96981

thank you

this one is a one sided battle meters easily took this better layed punches metas structure n flow.... n the closer wus funny as shit and its true... My VOte-Meters... can yall drop a honest vote on the battles in my sig... ThanX... 'That's All FOlks!'
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Can you vote on my battle please!!!

eh...yeah...meter or whatever took this...but his verse was weak as well...gazeebo...--that whole ask your sister shit is played everywhere...also the dick in mouth..try to be more creative with more complex punches...you know?..also try to throw in some personals and multis aight....peace....

thanks for all ur suggestions.......ill take them in and get better//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

any more votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!