yo last thread was made wrong so i reposted this

it belongs in elevated anyway i know you dont have 5 wins yet but since you are co-leader of IJL then it belongs here

the rules we both agreed to were this:

10-20

no crew votes
no hate
no dickride
no recycling
no feeding
no dumbass shit
no freeposting until both verses are up




I will post ure verse right now and then i will have to spit tomarow because i have a mid-term and i need to study
peace

Rapfires Verse:


Herbal's an herb that I'll murder with verbal words that'll curse your whole verse//
This kat knows he wouldn't be 'ridin deep' if the gravediggers buried his whole hearse//
I'll make ya soul burst with my punchlines and sadistic deadly siccness//
have u runnin like a headless chicken w/ gore lookin nastier than when spaghetti thickens//(eww)
I'm so dope I can beat ur ass with ur own shoe and u'll swear it's brilliant//
then battle u here, n let everyone know u gettin 'fucked online' like Paris Hilton!!!*//
u couldn't get the crowd hype if u spoon-fed the first 20 rows Ritalin//
cuz u 'jack' ur shit worse than Michael n his 'son' did that little kid!//
listen to my riddles bitch, they'll have you in pain, depressed, n pissed like u just flipped ya Lexus//
and ripped ya necklace, cuz bottom line is ur style drags worse than a black kids first trip to Texas//
I think this whole board realizes you couldn't 'beat a newbie' if you was to 'rip ya semen'**//
and you winnin this battle would get protested more than George Bush durin his trip to England//
I got a big dick + "black-male", 20 pics of this litttle whore-bitch-on-all-fo's//
I'm quick to 'knock u over' with them 'cheesey lines' so get tha door-it's-dom-i-no's!

~~~~FINISH HIM!!!~~~~

The crowd ain't cheerin ya verse, they screamin' in pain, so be qui-et-fool//
You got no buisness in this fuckin battle, like John Denver teachin pi-lot-school!!!!!!!


(*)Paris Hilton is this chick that's been in the news recently...Her parents own Hilton hotels (this rich ass chain of hotels) And her rich snobby ass got some bad porn that she made posted on the internet..now her parents are suing anyone that puts the videos online....

(**)Semen is techinically a "new kid" lol....it makes sense...so don' tell me that it doesn't lmao j/k.....

^ yea...

let's all remember...Emerge's name when I wrote the verse was "herbal".....lol...

n duke u shoulda told me all that about this forum instead of checking in to the other battle...neway I just wanted to post to let folks know why I called u by a diffrent name so they don't think I bit....

peace

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<center> I.J.L</center>

I will RAPIDly vicously subdue ya like an EMERGEncy
Burning me? no chance like having a woman on U.S. currency
You vermin seed learn and seek me cuz im higher spittin cold FIRE
You walking a thin wire & couldn't be hot inside a turbo dryer
"Hip Hop...is my life" damn!, then i must inform you're dead
Must have no balls or brain cuz ure impotent with or without ure head
You shudn't have a verse instead shuda put "i lose automatically"
Would of had the same effect ya wrecked shook wit incapacity
You're a mutated abnormality when people see you they run
I am your mother's new husban cuz you got "steped on son"
Stretched bars, played content, no wit,... & ure not funny
If your occupation is being emcee obviously u aint makin money
Every word stinging you like africanized bees guarding honey
I bet you become a transvestite, just to say you're an "X-Man"
I must be the Italian Job cuz its evident i got the best plan
This moron is from the "dirrty souf" yet he is spic and span
Gay man oxy-moronic like a ambidextrous pianist wit no hands
This bitch is newbie yet a co-leader wit a heart of a rookie
You should have ducked, made like a dropout and played hooky

all votes deleted for the reason both of you cant win... none of the same people may vote. honest votes only please. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

*scratches head.....doesn't understand y this thread was reopened*

uhhh....wasn't this battle over 5-4???...y was this shit reopened.....

peace
4:20

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opening - tie
flow - emerge
punches - both
multis - both
metas - rapid
struct - emerge
vocab - emerge
closing - rapid

overall:

emerge = 3/8
rapid = 2/8
tie = 3/8

my vote - emerge

nice battle....

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I'm not breakin' it down line for line, but I'll do this for ya...

Punches: E
Disses: E
Wordplay: R
Metas: E
Multis: R
Creativity: R
Personals: R
Focal Point: E
Rhyme: E
Flow: E
Enjoyment: R
Humor: R
Opener: E
Closer: R
Structure: E
Vocab: R
Complexity: E
Overall: E

E had alot more punches filled with heat than R did. R did have punches, but not as hard as E. R also had alot of wordplay which made him jump up and make this battle more competitive. Overall, this battle was nice and well organized which proves why you are in this forum battling. Nice job both of you, keep it up!!!

Vote: E

Barely seen this shit...good thing feeble saw that gay ass shit!
Should have stayed closed the first time when i won 5-1.
Anyway uppin and please read the battle because people aren't voting right...hint he had no personals...

peace

Punches: E
Disses: E
Wordplay: R
Metas: E
Multis: R
Creativity: E
Personals: R
Rhyme: E
Flow: E
Enjoyment: E
Humor: R
Opener: E
Closer: R
Structure: E
Vocab: E
Complexity: E

E= 11 R = 5

Overall: E

E came harder...this battle was good..some nice lines in there...but E takes this

Sorry well e came harder . way harder R you need to improve on your flow and you structure is as strectched as fuck . .

vote = Emerge
simple as that .

Well see this battle has moved....well anywayz i thought i vote since it looked interesting...breakdown

Punches: both
Disses: E
Wordplay: R
Metas: E
Multis: R
Creativity: R
Personals: R
Focal Point: E
Rhyme: E
Flow: E
Enjoyment: both had me laughing
Humor: both
Opener: E
Closer: R
Structure: E
Vocab: R
Complexity: both little more on e little bit more on r at different times
Overall: E

in the end i do think rapidfire came hard....i do think it was close...but emerge took this one...i dont why rapidfire hasant got a ill record cause that dawg is good...

respect yall no hate on this battle...

uppin...#2





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