This was a diss I did.
Just peep.
His name was Nalije-Laajik.

…Is he serious?…
Dissin my crew is like condoms and cum you’ll be contained, Tamed and removed from existence from forced anger like Abel and Kane.
Stop dreamin you’ll never match my fame, Lyrics virus your brain like Gladiator only one of us’ll be slain.

…Stop while you can…
Attemptin to corrupt my territory, My appearance bring bloodshed and glory.
Words are gory so I’m labeled your antagonist cause your bedtimes’ without a story.

…You’re askin for it…
I grow sicc off your beef, Like SLiK and his streets, You just wanna claim you’re a chief.
Words space your teeth, Like vampires you’ll suffer nightmares and lay in coffins to sleep, Son you don’t want my level to peak.

…Here it comes…
In your crew T-Giz is your hardest, I suggest you study more battles cause you’ve never been raw kid.
Stop feedin us this garbage, No respect for you so when you’re dead I’ll just piss on your carcass.

…Idiot…
You’re not ill and your raps neither, Like Abraham Lincoln you’ll be assassinated while in a theater.
Tryin to be a leader with no direction cause everyone’s aimin for your crew and everyone of us are wearin a wife beater.

…I can’t stop…
Go ‘head and bite on my lyrics they’re sour, I’m always on your block like a prowler but you always seem to cower.
Your scripts I devour, Every hour I’m eatin a brain cell so soon you’ll suffer a black out and lose power. (Think of New York)

…Smoke Break…
Tha Commission’s a joke, I treat yall like plants cause when you’re of age I’m a sift and smoke.
Tha whole crew is a hoax, Take me for granted and find yourself bein shipped off on a boat. (Garbage Boat)

…End…
Only give credit when credit is given, I only keystyle all of my spits so if you can’t hang then stick to your writtens.

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i think it was a good piece flow was ight vocab ight multis good punches ok wordplay ok overall 6.5/10