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i have no name yet so imma get it by killing u why is this cat named visine cause his dreams wont come true/ill put em to a hault turn his dreams into nightmares have u wakin up in cold sweats wishing your mommy was there

pull out my 380 stick it straight in your mouth/ tell the people call the coroner and ship this nigga down south/where we sell dope pimp hoes and kill niggas im the the real vision this nigga just imatation like red bacon playboy u need to stop fakin

You "platinum" cut? i'm "Smash" the butcher, the classic pusher
I Flatten'um yup! blastin' hookers, punk you like Ashton Kutcher
Fuck'a turkey ya chest i'm stuffin', bullets free ya vest is bluffin
Is not hard ta see ya skill is next ta nothin', lem'e suggest ya somethin'
Quit rappin' while you still a head, the rest'a ya body already dead, burgandy red
I threw 1 punch but you stedy bled, u not ready yet, for this heavy thread
Even if ya status is shinin', ya chances of winnin' are declining
Fallin away outta the linin', hands down spinnin rewinding
let me be reminding, theres no way you'll prevail that's my finding
It's an uphill battle you climing, if you lookin for the W you got bad timing

U Threw a punch a suggested that i bled from it u got me fucked cause i dont bleed cause im the first to hit/ chop u into 20's and dimes and sell u as my dummies/this nigga think he done wrote some shyt that is funny u fiction im fact ill put 100 slugs on your back lay you on a mat why u aplogize for fakin like you had a gat/
just hang your act up before i beat u the fuc up

platinum....you just got merked....your rhymes suck....I guarantee you live up in J-Town or something don't you sorry ass nigga? Damn.....actn like a thug, don't even know what the streets are nigga....and on top of that...your rhymes absolutely suck....vote-visine

playboy u dont kno me or a damn thing about me and as a matter of fact i stay in rangeland...everyone has bad days

first off..........platinum read the rules.........and lern how to battle correctly..........

u post one verse...........with 10 lines..........
ne way

punches - vis
flow - vis

no further explanation needed......
visine wins..........

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visine kills him because

P didnt have any structure flow or well thought out hard hitting punches

and visine simply did...even tho it didnt take much to beat P's verse

nice battle.

vote visine - flow and punches. this is the most lopsided battle i've ever seen.

platinum - you "pimp hoes and kill niggas"? watch yo'self. that's some wack shit right there.

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3 posts for one verse?!?!?!?!

WTF man, learn to battle!

u dont need the posts that badly, lol!

visine wins bcuz u broke the rules neway, but he had a beta verse neway

vote = visine