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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS: My Love Song...
IP: 07E0 A9F2
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2527#post982527
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2538#post982538 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2558#post982558 A woman’s touch is like a rose, jus frozen in bloom Fuck that I use em for grabbing dick and sucking my broom And their perfume is fragranced can turn a man crazy But I prefer the scent of pussy, I aint fussy im jus lazy Cos when ya meet the right one ya heart skips a beat When I meet the right one, I pound and push em with meat Jiz on their face, I don’t lye adjacent or embrace Im ahead of the race cos I use em as tools to burn my fuel Generating power through climax’n breaking the rules Cos Love is for brothers, its my length that’s for scrubbers And their mothers. Yes ya need to prioritise ya position Many Ladies dishin, plenty wishing for a quick filling And they come and go, A jewel to enjoy to share in those special memories but ya But I got plenty, more notches than America’s Felonies bro’s ya bro unconditioned! “Love” Like no other comfort curled next to one another I don’t bother, jump in the shower, get changed back out in an hour To Crack another flower and dirty the family name Casting shadows and shame, deceiving- Get them believing, Bringing “I Love You” into the frame To get lay’d, but I don’t mean it, jus works like a switch Ya turn it on and receive all channels to ya dish I wish it didn’t shatter ya insides when ya love is gone It don’t I change the sheets, after shave, and out looking for thong So That’s my love song, unconventional but true Its clear to me, if it aint to you, then ya too sentimental …..A FUCKING GIRL THROUGH!!!!! |
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you fucked my head up there hermano!!!!!!!!!1
im thinken legit love ballad and get porn ..... this was good funny percise on topic and colorful i like it alot |
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thnx twin....theres a couple of lines where for some reason its fucked..must'nt have realised when i posted it cos im fucked....oh well...fuck it....thnx...thought id bring a new twist to the love song thing cos the normal is fuckin my head...lol....pZ....
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funny shit
....sexest but yea. good peice. keep it up.
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lol.....it aint sexist..its jus my way of thinkin.......dont get stuck down...fuck around...
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shit ppl...........whats the matter with ya'll...cant ya hit it.....pZ
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uppin.....thnx......lol....
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lol...good shit...it was funny in some parts your point got across...i found sometimes it fell off just once or twice in about 2 lines but oh well you made up for it in your structure and flow good verse it was a nice read
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thnx...jus trying to inject a bit of sumthin else....pZ....
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anymore...this is getting slept on aint it...fucking hell..lol...pZ
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damn this shit was funny...lmao....i dont find it sexest either cuz theres alot of guys that think like that..... good rhyme scheme and flow thow..... and this was deffinetly worth the read.... good shit tho.....
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lol....this shit is pretty funny..yet at the same time sexual
keep it up....nice drop =) |
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This was good.. The flow lacked multis and had a few inners, it flowed nicely though, um, The concept was played, but it didn't get too boring, I guess this was personal, there wasn't no explosive lines, some vocab was really basic, I wouldn't like to hear this on audio.. But it is good..
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