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Old 09-12-03, 04:50 AM   #1
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Meks & King Of Thievez - 'Straight Spittin'

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= Blood is thicker than water =
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you won't be talkin' so much shit when I'm slittin' ya throat...
blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...

you betrayed me so I had to come to grips with the toast...
blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...

blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...
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Yo, Check It,
I'm "Lethal" wit a Pencil, Put Ya Hed to da Rubber,
Dope Hail Mary Instrumental, but mah Flow is Red Actin Stubbern,
Choke and Bail Fairly and Sentimental, Like Fab Yo I'm Fed Training In Fact by "Glover", Meks and King......Quite an Act to Discover,
All the Rb Hoes we Aint Treatin'em Right, But Fo Us Theres No Bleeding in Sight, I need'a Git on'a Mic, Spit on'a Fight and Shit on' Dyke, Meks Never Spend on'a Wife, if a Foe Need man Lend'em a Knife, Send'em his Life, UPS Packaged It Tight, United Pot Smokers Stackin Tha Bright, Non-Stop Action is Right, No Cop can Stop Me from Mackin this Life, Kickin Game to My Own Soul, cuz No Bitches Deserve Meks' Phone Call, ta Be Tha Best is Ma Lone Goal, See Meks and King and Get Your Home Stole, Robbin Property While Droppin Prophecy, I'm a Big Winner Like A Lock In The Lottery, Runnin the Board like Monopoly, Omens Cut you Up and Write All Over You Like Mohagony, Fuck Monotany cause Nobody's Stoppin Me, If I Get Slipped Im'a Do It Co-Opperativley, Wouldn't be A Shock ta Me, I Got More Balls Than Jeremy Shockey See? Even More than A Basketball Coach Wen Shoppin He Be, I Aint Scared of No Man, Not Pre-Pared I could Plague you, and you'd Be Banned, My Word Play Will Cut Off Your Hand, A single Sentence Dis-Ables You Text-Cees, Wrinkle Pesents to Enable my Blessings, Confessing, Is Nothin but Bull Shit Never Give Up ya Chest-Kid, You'll be Left At Rest, Shit, Bitin is Theft Stealin Meks' Spit, So Fuck Theses Herbs Like Purple casue Thas My Shit,
Greeen Buds Smokin ta Choke, Ya'll Jokin You Toke Broken Folk, Got Ya Ethnicity Stripped, I Gotta Mic's Proxcimity Gripped Strategically Tipped, On Target Like A Fien ta Git A Hit, Ya Splien'll git Ripped Deceivin I'm Quick, Puffy's Bitch can Be Receivin tha Dick, and You Know Tha Chic is Nice Never Drop tha Best Shit, Like Jerry Rice she On Toppa tha Catch List, You think You can Win then Bet This, Study For Dayz you Still Wouldn't Get This,
Leave Ur AIM Buddies in More Graves than Severin Ppl Neck-Less, A Style Thas Wreck-less before you Dis-Respect This.....Check This, Wen I'm Done My Direction Ya Brain and Bank Account Make A Connection, Both were Left Re-Tentitive and Senseless, I'm Dimented and Offensive Always Pro-jectin ta Git You On Ya Defensive,
I'm "Movin" Tha "Ball" in Rhyme a Contender, Provin "8" at'a Time Everyone "NOSE" your a Pretender, Haze prally End up as A Public Defender Stuck wit Sub-Digits From Lenders, Meks Spit Ruggid Snippets Like Letter Senders - Hit a Track Plugg it Rip it's Header and Bend'er, I'll Brake Tha Indusrty in Half, Stop Takin In-Justries From A Mod's Wrath, Wen Hot Bakin Dust-Trees no1's A Match do Tha Math, Wonderin up the Wrong Path, Come at Omens but it's a One Way Street, Dumb Ass Listin To The Omens My Gun Spray Heat and You Must Nay Speak, Bust Fillers At Ya Mind's Peak So Remind Ya Fleet, Your Nothin Even Combined For Me Ta Meat, Fuck Beef, I'll take youz Out one-by-one Discrete, Hidin in Alley Ways and Side Streets, Wherever We Meat Don't Mistake Me I'm An Assasian Of Creeps,
Blaze Herbs Like Haze Werds Purple Nerds Erkel Verbs Lurkin Herds Ready ta Spill Blood Like Merkin Herds, Then The Cowards Are Served, I've Empowered the Verb-Thas Mah Slaughter House Type WERD.

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*kING of Thievez*

Blood is thicker than water

you was like a brotha to me you protected me when you put the tre in my hand...
I thought that I was safe wit' my man...but then you went on betrayin' the fam...
damn...you stomped me out and tried to leave me for dead...
you just stood there laughing at me watching me bleed from my head...
you was deceiving when you had me believing that we was fam after all the shit that we did...
you had me beat down before you snitched on the kid and left me hit with a bid...
son...you knocked me out and almost broke my arm black...
so next time we meet...you dead mufucka...quote me on that...
I'ma shank ya stomach until I fuckin' splatter ya abs...
show up at ya funeral and try to act like I'm sad...
pop you 3 timez...open casket?????? not in this case...
I'll give you a buck 50 and leave you shot with a slit face...
ya boys ask me why I did it I'm like "he shoulda heard when I told him"...
I'ma plant a car bomb in the fuckin' hearst that you roll in...
you shoulda fled the city when you found out I was alive...
stayed disguised when outside then maybe ya might have survivied...
as for that night of betrayal I ain't stoppin' till I see every one of them bastidz dropped...
if I look at life through ya eyez now...all I'd see was a casket top...

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you won't be talkin' so much shit when I'm slittin' ya throat...
blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...

you betrayed me so I had to come to grips with the toast...
blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...

blood is thicker than water but beef is thicker than both...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:07 AM   #2
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YOU NEEDED TO EVEN YOUR VERSES OUT
VOCABWAS RAW I LIKED THAT FROM THE WAY I READ MEK SOUND LIKE HE HAS A RASS KASS STYLE
FLOW WAS OOF THE HOOK VOCAN AS WELL AND THOUGHT .KING DID IHIS THING AS ESPECETED BOTH YOU CAME EQUALLY RAW JUST VERSE LENGTH NEEDS WORK.
also there were certain times where MEK got repetetive with words that didnt require it but he did illness and KING had certain punches that needed a lil more complexity

YO KING if you still want me in im down for OMENS.........
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Old 09-12-03, 05:11 AM   #3
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for all those who can't tell...I'ma explain it now...Meks' verse is on some battle beef and my verse is on personal beef...so we writin' about beef from 2 different anglez...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:13 AM   #4
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oh...thanks for the feedback Word...and Omens is ready for ya...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:13 AM   #5
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MAJOR props to both MC's good vocab nice subject and two well thought out verses, shame about the difference in size,
The chorus had me thinking of a backin tune and "backdown" by 50 should be perfect
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Old 09-12-03, 05:16 AM   #6
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^^^lol...maybe...I'ma try to see hoe it goez over the Backdown beat...I got more instrumentals than a pencil...lol...<------is not high...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:25 AM   #7
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i sent you a verse try out read my new post
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Old 09-12-03, 11:23 AM   #8
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Upppn for sum feeeeeeedback HERRRR......................Back Down Would Be straight.............I'm down to do this in Audio.............Just Lemme Know
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Old 09-12-03, 01:01 PM   #9
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u had a good concept, nice floe
vocab could use a lill work, but over all it as good
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Old 09-12-03, 03:41 PM   #10
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^^^thanks Stormy...uppin'...
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Old 09-12-03, 05:01 PM   #11
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aiyo...

I thought that shit was ill as fuck...
the hook was top of the line... I was feelin it,
and meks just took it and ran with it on the first verse,
I was feelin him like a broken arm... lol
he was spittin tight... had great vocab and a good flow...

K.O.T.- you set it off from another angle and I caught on to that shit. I was really feelin your flow and what you was talkin bout,
agian good vocab and flow... you could put a lil more word play in it, but its tight as hell like it is....


WAY TO REP THE OMENS FELLAS,

A.T. and da rest of da crew
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Old 09-12-03, 11:47 PM   #12
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ayo i thought this was pretty ill...nice vocab....worplay overall hot shit nice nice nice on both endes
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Old 09-13-03, 12:28 AM   #13
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tight verse i could relate to it, nice vocab and your words and lines were mad hard hittin !!!!!!!!!!
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Old 09-14-03, 04:47 AM   #14
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^^^thanks man...uppin'...
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Old 09-14-03, 07:40 PM   #15
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upppn like a mofo...................
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