If I ruled the world…and the chance came true…things would change.
Would I do right? Or would I snap and think it’s too strange.
I would make rights and wrongs…people would go against me.
They’d abuse and call me names…yet that shit wouldn’t affect me.
At first I won’t stop poverty…stop them poor kids on the streets.
I’d give the homeless sleep…and the starving something to eat.
I’d make the depressed happy…and the weak become strong.
Actually first I’d stop early deaths…for them sick babies to live on.
Id make the dumb become smart…the smart-asses to be quiet.
Some wouldn’t need help…id make the fats be able to diet.
The world would be better…we wouldn’t be swarmed in pollution.
Things would become great…think of it as the next revolution.
Hate would be gone…and pain and suffering would be no longer.
Ruling would be like a star in this game…to me it would be an honour.

CHORUS:
If I ruled the world some things would be different…something significant.
You better be into it…cause ima find new ways…to get ya’ll listening.
I’m just trying to make this future perfect…People treated with respect.
Its worth it…think of a place that’s not full of hate and getting wrecked.

SECONDS VERSE
People would be blinded by me…the power was stronger as days go.
Work was nothing…money wasn’t an object I had an unlimited pay rolls.
People lost belief but it changes as the good came…its now a good game.
My life turned from pain and shame…to a life of the glamour and fame.
My face became known everywhere I had more money than bill gates.
People used me for it…morning came, I’m thinking what new user waits.
But it all aint bad I had everything I wanted…even my own theme park.
I couldn’t tell if girls liked me or they wanted my money or cars.
Sometimes it wouldn’t be funny…the women was tacking charge.
Theres always something bad in places…but shit can change quickly.
Some think sickly…they didn’t like my power so they try and kill me.
If I were to die…my once owned world would come crashing down.
People would go back to living in poverty...some to weak to frown.

CHORUS:
If I ruled the world things would be different…something significant.
You better be into it…cause ima find new ways…to get ya’ll listening.
I’m just trying to make this future perfect…People treated with respect.
Its worth it…think of a place that’s not full of hate and getting wrecked.

LAST VERSE
Things are getting boring, I have everything but im losing friends.
At the start this shit was dope as hell…now I cant wait for it to end.
My power is old I need to just be normal…I jus wan be like the rest.
There is nothing here to suggest…so I’m beginning to be stressed.
I was getting sick and tired of helping people who did me wrong.
I wished I was born normal…I wanted to have friends and to belong.
Everyone seemed to like me…but was it for real?…or an act.
I was too known to leave…and too looked up to, to react.
But I must keep working to make this place clean and worthy.
Keep going…and to show these people that im not learning.
I’d make shit we don’t have….then take something we need.
After all of that, id stop ruling the world…cuz we really need to be free.

CHORUS:
If I ruled the world things would be different…something significant.
You better be into it…cause ima find new ways…to get ya’ll listening.
I’m just trying to make this future perfect…People treated with respect.
Its worth it…think of a place that’s not full of hate and getting wrecked.

REPEAT CHORUS

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thats pretty good man for postive rap u know what i am sayin

yeah i thought this worked pretty well in paragraph, normally it takes away, but think it added to the flow on this one....some nice imagery in there....liked the way you set it....got the message across good....you didnt leave ya links though.....the thing i would say though, it seemed quite basic in places...but.....pZ...

UPPIN......

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This was an interesting read, to say the least. If I could pick one area to critique, it would be word choice; your conceptual ideas were fairly sound, but I think the luster of the concepts was diminished by some poor phrasing. This had a humorous tone to it as well, although I don't think that it was intentional. . I was humored by the vernacular you so eloquently used to describe being the leader of the free world. For example, would "making the smart-asses become quiet" really be one of the utmost goals on your political agenda? Ah well, continue to work & I see a bright future for you. As I said, work on your phrasing and wording - the only advice I can give you is to proofread. Proofread profusely after writing your piece, and be positive that you wrote exactly what you wanted to write. Good Luck, and God bless.

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this was good i liked your chorus you had a neat topic very interesting. not played at all, your flow and structure was very good your ideas got put across nicely and all in all this was a very well done writ

if you could return the favour by hittin up my battle in mym sig...that would be apreciated thanks

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461