fuck the bullshit, 15 lines
no bullshit, crew hate or gay votes
no feeding recycling
ten minutes and shit to drop

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aite....FirsT TExt battle in like 4 months been doing audios more

One look at this kid u no he wont last wit the wakest rhymes..
im quick to take advantage off this bitch an his plastic 9's..(peep sig lol)

How can u rep the bay,when your gay,quick to lik many heads..
Your the weakest lite weight that ive seen still stuck on Jenny Craig..

Trust me kid,on my worst day ya wordplay wont touchme..
MY skillz are as sharp as a razor but still a bit rusty..

Once im thru wit this kid hell no the meaning of hard kor
Why.Cuz my punches are so lethal.leave him like his avatar..<peep an u mite understand.>

This rapshit aint ya thing just quit now an forget the hood.
Ill consider u a Artist..cuz that NINE U Drew looks pretty good..(the one on the left)

U prolly shudnt show up cuz i no after this u wont bust back..
My spits blow up,if u tryna spit heat u better brush up fast..

an ill end this short,like ya punches landin,u just a menace..
to rappin,so ill Hand u the Loss at the end of this sentence..

alright heres the check, ill post in a few, i was battlin some other head and shit

adfadfasdfadfasdf i hate that 100 character shit askljlfja;ldsf

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yo...


this kid must be dumb, or just not know how to use addition/
cuz if u born in 1980, ur not 18 thats 5 years ur missin//
12 posts a day, thats a lot of fuckin analyzing/
or u must be thinkin of me, gettin wet, fantisizing//
4 months is awhile, so rust is bound to be a factor/
and ive cracked more bones then a ciropractor//
u have occupational hazards, merkin emcess/
cuz ur gun didnt go off, now u fertilize my trees//
i dont brandish a weapon, no need to pak heat/
cuz i probably got ur girl on her knees beggin for my meat//
fuck denial, this dude is goin into deep depression/
cuz im only 18, teachin him a life full of lessons//
nothings could be truer then "ignorance is bliss"/
so u must be fuckin stupid thinkin that weak shit was a diss//

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meh
time for some votes


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Opener- Narc
Closer- Narc
Metas- Narc
Flow- Hard
Vocab- Neither

Vote- Narc

Elevate both y'all


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98955

not #1 but #2

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opener hard
closer narc
punches hard
personals narc
wordplay tie
vocab tie
overal hard


weak battle both....

peace

aight Nicortics took it wit a lil better word play and better strucer the other dude was juse to simple. bolth could eliveate thou Holla

vote Nicortics

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=98793

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not 1 but 3

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The Breakdown:


Narcotics: Good drop even if u were a bit rusty. Consistency of punches were there. The "Nine u drew" was one of your best lines, nice personal and nice wordplay. Wasn't feelin that much the beginnin, but ending was dope. Flow was there, complexity was there for the most part. Good drop.

HarDcor3: Decent drop. U actually started out well, decent personal. But then, why get into posts as a personal? It went downhill from there, nothing of your verse compared to your opener. So the consistency was a major factor, it just wasn't there. Good attempt though.


My vote goes to Narcotics for the har-hittin punches and personals. Decent battle, though pz.

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

Sry for the freepost, can u hit this up. much appreciated pz.



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=daillistrebel

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

i thought hard kore was better overall in this one, but it was a pretty close battle
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