Just a couple things I came up with....

I need yo...my mom just tossed my porno mag..you don't care cuz you just a fag. At this point your like ..this kid is wack..he ain't shit and that I should really pick up the slack. Well maybe I'm just a :noobe:..so sue me..

Just check that out for me..

Good stuff?

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names or this will get closed...

But man...this was wack....you need some serious elevating here lol....im not gonna get into detail...but just keep elevating man...work on everything...structure, multies, vocab....but just keep working on this...

why do I have to leave 3 links? you little motherfucker..who do you think you are! Nobody tells me to do that, I do what I want! Whenever I want! So I suggest you lay off...so what do you all think?

Fuck You Masta C! You can shove your fucking links up your ass! This board pisses me the fuck off...too many damn rules! Its freestyling fuckers...you all need to just back the fuck off and have a good time for once!! Fuck you all! I'm tired of this shit!

Why do you fucking idiots, reply to these pieces.. can someone reply to my peice god damn

Shove it up your ass too! Go suck a cow!

Dont' even think about closin this shat either! I want an explanation!