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Old 12-15-03, 12:40 AM   #1
streetdreamz
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BombZ vs. streetdreamz

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letz do dis homie check in and choose who spit first
 
Old 12-15-03, 01:05 AM   #2
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i already set up im waitin on u nigga, letz go fo sho nigga..........................................
 
Old 12-15-03, 01:25 AM   #3
BombZ
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alright, i'll go first dawg, times here.............................................. ......................................
 
Old 12-15-03, 01:43 AM   #4
BombZ
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So you think you fabulous with streetdreamz,
I bet if I met you it'd be (POP!) and sweet dreams...

Let me wake you up, aim a glock at your throat now niggahs is shakin' up.....
More than a vibrators movement, let me go to "The End"
and tell his ass theres no more room new men...

If I had let you go first, it would of probably took 3 dayz, so your ass can think of something nice to say, but by then my body would have decayed,

Cuz Niggahs be pussy these dayz, just look, he's horrified,
Couldn't merk my ass if I fucked up and got disqualified...
Tongue Tied, i've won mine so I should probably let you pass,
But I'm afraid if I do, you'd walk by and fall on your ass...

He's takin' a big risk, I know why he's scared, he's a rookie,
This niggah's as nervous as he was on his first time playin' hookie..

I wouldn't be surprised if this niggah was still a virgin,
If I taught him how to fuck, he's probably think his dick was spillin' detergent,

Theres a first time for everything, but this will be your 2nd time you'll loose, i'm still confident that he' couldn't "own" this if I packed up and decided to moved...
 
Old 12-15-03, 10:34 AM   #5
Anonymo$
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From: Toledo
IP: 3F1B 4C86

Bombz you definatly need to work on how to write your flows. like for example do this
"i need to take a setp
towards me breakin your neck"
see how my rhymes ended on the end of the line. put good job man keep it up.
 
 


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