You've achieved nothing nothings achieved
Flip it anyway you wanna, Its still percieved
Do you con-scede? Your wife ain't pregnant
Like oranges, i'm cutting you into segments
He's offering anal so kids are more into him
Does he rap with hair? Your lines in-fringed
BornToKill's checking every tortoise he sees
He lost his hare Your also a pathetic emcee
Genetic men see him as lover.. Your brother
Is coming for you.. But does he take cover?
Doesnt mind me holding him against his will
You leave ass.. So he's also leaving his skill
Yet nothing much... BornToKill's loving butts
Like little kids who smoke, but can't light up
Want to try your luck? Then try the 84 wins
I'll wipe them clean like a preist to your sins
Born To Kills more boar-ring than a Pig Pen
Hes had alot of time something like Big Ben
You lived when armstrong visited the moon
Now 34 years later.. Its only limited to you
Out of the Blue, Came you wanting ' black '
Raps, I'ma flip this and give you raps back
So your black and blue Stacks are Through
Christmas Bonus? Nah another Jenga due
Did someone Wenger you? Come from lows
Right to the top so your shitty mouth blows
Tear you new holes Just too watch it scald
His lifes ' lows ' so is his ups being ' slow '
So did you find that tortoise? or your hoe
When you soon dye Everyone Will Rejoyce
No wills voiced, I told you..... Your Nothing
Born To Kill will have to commit suicide too
Keep his name true.

BLAH - All the oldies have left the site.. Toodle Doo

Your closer was quite nice brother, but, it seems as if on some points you opted to finish off the bar with a line that just rhymed with the other one.. and really didnt have that much meaning behind it. Maybe you should go a little shorter? anyways..



good job my man.

very nice closer... your structure...once again... was impeccable...
still liked to know how you do that... but your wordplay was
aight... coulda used more... your punches were ok... but your
flow was damn nice... this was a pretty good read here....
props

~AshY~

Thanks for taking the time to put this together...

Great structure and flow.

Nice ass multi's.

So-so punches throughout...

But ya closer was tight, uh-huh.

Pretty good verse...

I'll work on some kinda return.

I like how Open Mic is getting used for dissing...

Pretty cool, yes it is.

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