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12-15-03, 11:11 AM | #1 | ||||
Half Lyricist/Half King
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Se7eN (Freestyle)
IP: 4577 CD9A
Ayo,
I'm Se7eN and I rip, a mic wit some slow hits// I crush my enemies, with energy, and a nine inch dick// So much 4 an impact, I packed some shit intact// Wit a razor blade, my trade, is 2 keep shit in packs// I don't talk shit, I rap, I drop pure numbers of atomic bombs// Cruch your world, in a swirl, gotcha praying and losing your calm// So I roll solo, and I've never been a fucking homo// I'm more off-beat, wit soft heat, than a mothafucking hobo// So low though, say pshyco, and I'll push the red button// Your a soft loser, a bruiser, who really thinks he's somethin'// Your nothin', a small vocab, your speech is so low that// I'll rip you, shit you, out like I really didn't know that//(damn) Se7eN don't play bullshit, I juss rap shit, to not cool it// And cause a war, str8 2 the core, and fire dozen of spittin bullets// (hahahahaha) Vote good or bad on the poll,iight peace out, Se7eN
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12-15-03, 02:46 PM | #2 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
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Bu this was ok...structure in this was alright, could be touched up though i think....you had some multies, but i think they could have been a bit better though.....flow in this was ok, but it fell off at some points...but keep at it. |
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