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Old 12-15-03, 10:23 PM   #1
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Angry *Somethen raW*

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Get at this....Gangsta type....yo...

Uh, yeah,
I'll punch a nigga in his teeth, for fronton his beef
Blast off half his skull for even tryen to think
I got that hot lead that'll leave you bleeden-out-ink
Drippen-like-a-sink, ya flesh is-starten-to-stink
I got more chill to my ice than a hockey rink
More color to my flow than a hot tropic pink
Don't care if it's cold out, I'm poppen that mink
Put holes up in ya float cause I want ya to sink
Want ya to die
You a chump ma'fucka while I stunt to the sky
I'm a creep type nigga, I stunt on a spy
Roll around wit the "heat" and it's cocked on "HI"!

Nise

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Old 12-15-03, 10:26 PM   #2
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yo i liked it...im listenin to Big L flamboyent right now and to that music i read this shit and it went well so ima have to say that this was pretty fuckin good.good flow.

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Old 12-15-03, 11:02 PM   #3
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed. Thanks.
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Old 12-15-03, 11:13 PM   #4
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hmm pretty nice multis here..........u could have used some wordplay,better vocab but it wuz str8 had a nice flow that was conssistant throughout tha drop
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Old 12-16-03, 11:56 AM   #5
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Nice multi's...

A couple of nice metas.

Good flow.

Content was mostly eh...

Self-prop.

Nothing new.

5/10

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Old 12-16-03, 03:04 PM   #6
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...Hmmm...average...
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