Ayo,
Dialated eyes, blood shot shit, you'll never find
You tape my battles, so u can copy,play, pause, and rewind
I'm behind, sometimes, I juss cut the shit off, press pause
Then I hit a soft, rotation, and realize I really have no cause
Laws, and my balls, twist my words, till there against a wall
Have Your girl saying fuck u, i want Se7eN, atleast his dick ain't small
Shit You realize I never crawl, think, sink into a mental state
God had you emotionally laid, into a fucked up physical trait
Ok, so Freestylin' off a beat or juss going str8 ocapella
But My words ain't flyin' ,they sorin', juss like disses on roc-a-fella
So knock a fella, sock a fella, make his ryhmes run off course

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But this was ok i thought...structure in this i thought was alright, could be touched up a bit maybe...could have added some multies to this to help it out though...flow was ok, it got off in some parts though...vocab in this was alright, could be up'd though...but keep at it.

ya solid part was the structure.....
rhymes werent to clever....
but i guess you came hard with the whole attitude/self glorification thing.

nice work!