im watin on you cuzzin

here duke'' u spit first if u rea' the rules..so checkin.

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10 -15 lines put down when ever i'll go first............................................. ................................................

you goin against me is like askin to lose/
cuase all your rhymes stay fake like plastic spoons/
man even my rhymes sick somebody cal the doctor/
this nigga wanna be his daddy but hes only imposter/
nigga you not the one so you aint duckin them all/
its like you a weak condom so i aint fuckin wit you dog/
and you dont wanna see me when i let the shottie blast/
for a year you'll be a pacient in a fuckin body cast/
im doin dirt im a janitor wit hammers and clips/
stick pussy!! make you strip like d angelo did/
this chump aint ready somebody stop the battle/
cause the only thing coming close to me is my fuckin shadow/ holla back!!!

im waitin cuzzo
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i guess you was scerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrred!! !!!......................................

your lyrics r "lyrically dis-abled", so u "longed-to-rapture"
it's funny, he stopped 'droppin bombs" when "sadam was captured!!"
massacure ya "law" cuz im "sick wit this order!"
you ain't gettin "head", the girl wen' to "pick up a quarter!" (his avy!!)
your record resembles th' "rate of ya text"!
"ills" a mailman that won' "deliver to ya "state of address!
so fuck it, son..your just "scared of the news"
an only time u droppin bombs" is postin piccs of "terrorist news!"
nigga, ya mad-awful ..so u won't her' the sounds of the gods"
he always gets "clapped" ain i ain't talkin "round of applause!"
ohh the sound of ya odds, is loud..like' the "land of prisoners"
so I'll the the "metal" to his body' like "handcuffs picture!"

im done wit' this...

last line..

*I'll put the*

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woowee...just witnessed a Merking...
BREAKDOWN--
Punches-Can
Flow-Can
Stucture-Both
Sustainment-Can
Enjoyment-Can
Metas-Can
Overall-Can
Can we can see ya got skillz..start to leave "" n bolds behind
and mature in opponent..but nice verse..props to you both

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98331

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

A'ight, herez tha breakdown...

Punches: Cannon
Flow: Cannon
Creatvity: Cannon (Picture shi' was dope)
Vocab: Cannon
Enjoyment: Cannon
Opener: Cannon
Closer: Cannon (Again, tha pic)
Personals: Cannon

Overall: Cannon
One sided, Stylz, ya jus need ta elevate...I think ya jus tryin ta be like Eminem wit ya short, quick ryhmez 'n all...but tha' won' cut it...ya gotta define ya own style...

Yo hit this up, plz, this bein slept HARD...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99213

CAN ya'll make sure ya hit that link asap plz...i need to finish it
so i can start battling...jus drop an honest vote pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98331

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

cann merked the cat like the newbie he is

handcuffs, work on geting more creative and meaner with your punches.
then see if your verses improve. im sure they will.

cann nice verse good wordplay and hard punches.
finisher was funny cuz i got to see who the little kid was behind talking all that hard shit bout his 'shottie'

my vote: cann

hit this up both of you please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99246

yea my vote goes to cannabarz you can tell he....or she is more veteran...the punches and personals were all on point probably the highlight line for me had to be.... the 3 bar...nice shit my vote once i get like 100 posts goes to cannabarz both ya'll plz hit this up with an opinion thanx..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99130

lmao, merkinggggggggggggggg, cannabarz does it again lmao, that opener had me laughin. Other guy, elevate man, make ur shit more complex, that does wonders on this board, just keep battling and u'l lsee dat in a few battles, u'll b 3x the battler u are now, but cannabarz did merk ya.

Vote- Cannabarz