ite bitch,

10 lines,
both spit in 15 mins,
no d/r, hate or crew votes.

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checking and ready............................................. .................................................. .......................................bitch

^hurry up and check............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................

check.....check.....check.....check.....check..... check.....check.....check.....check.....check..... check.....check.....check.....check.....check.....

lets get the beef sorted

rite i no in another battle ima bout to lose, so its clear im fucking angry,i
m going to merk this fool for beefing, and still wanting to battle me,
when did i ever say i cared about my record?~and me overated?,
if i was you i would of kept that shit to myself~got some good lyrics and waited,
im going to flip this shit~hes to big for his boots~his heads to inflated,
im thinking myself lucky being called overated, cause id rather be that than k;s most fucking hated,
^shit man im sorry youv'e never seen wordplay before~was that to confuseing?,
this herbs already posting votes on other battles~so scared of talking shit then loosing,
the thread you made was probally the most effective thing youv'e wrote,
but yet again like dick rideing man~thats not the type of shit that will get you a vote.


quick merking for this prick talking shit

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what u thinkin, oct. 31st is almost a month past
and you runnin with your 28-11 like a fucking halloween mask
any cat that read your shit, knows your a fucking joke
crackin u like an egg, a hard shell containing soft yolk
im not soft spoke, im exposin you till your head aches
first Oli Dogg, then K, fucking change to EMCEE FAKE
take you out by the ankles, you dont stand a fucking chance
K's like a parapalegic who swears he can breakdance
trippin him like im 'under dogg', this was your biggest mistake yet
dont trust ur resime..K like killed my pet in surgery, the definiton of FAKE VET

notes: his old name was 'oli dogg' hence the 'under dogg' line.

lol 2 months past i meant.

i dont even know what is going on anymore.

whats the date?.................................haha

good battle, i liked K's personals...they hit harder then PH
The structure on both was good although K's made his flow somewhat off, P had some good punches but i found there was only 1 that was really good

take you out by the ankles, you dont stand a fucking chance
K's like a parapalegic who swears he can breakdance

That was a dope line i thought

but k opened up heavy and finished with good consistancy

I enjoyed this line by k

when did i ever say i cared about my record?~and me overated?,
if i was you i would of kept that shit to myself~got some good lyrics and waited,

I thought that was dope

And I was feelin your persoanls more, but all in all close battle it was a good read from both but my vote goes to

K

If you both hae time can you peep my battle in my sig...it is being slept on an needs one more vote tobe closed thanks pz

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Both came a little weak here...

K's lines are all long and stretched.

Points off.

Lots of personals, but the wordplay and punches were pretty soft.

Same from Phoenix, lite wordplay, but I liked it better.

Punches were a bit funnier and harder.

Not much though.

Close battle, but for better format, and wittier, harder punches...

Phoenix

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Phoenix took diss battle wit harder punches n personals n metas...
K had the wordplay but that aint gonna win it plus K your flow wus really off with ur structure too....
My VOte-Phoenix Hit up any battle(s) in my sig... ThanX.....
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Aight, no hate no dr

Close battle, but weak

Punches: P
WordPlay: K
Vocab: P
Flow: P
Creativity:K
Humor: K
Vote:K by a tiny pubic hair

good battle, keep it goin

EVERYONE PLEASE VOTE ON THIS, HONESTLY
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nice close battle

Punches: P
WordPlay: K
Vocab: P
Flow: P
Creativity:K
Humor: K
overall:K

this was a pretty weak battle.. i have seen better from both.. anyways kedged it a little bit..

thank You.Bye

uppin this shit (1)

thanks for voting

lets get a few more............
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hmmm..was a close battle but professionalism
can win a match and it did here...
all else was equal but w/ Phoenix's structure
snappy and compact his punches hit hard N
flowed nice
K..shorten the length coz it fucks ya flow up bad
Vote-Phoenix..
props to both

MAKE SURE YA HIT THAT UP..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS UP PZ
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