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Old 12-18-03, 05:22 PM   #1
MeNTiLL
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New Track : Trapped

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Word ... First Verse ... MeNTiLL ... Second Verse ... Genocide ... Another track for our demo ... Produced by Sho Down for Rock It Productions and mixed by MeNTiLL ... LoL ... I still learnin' Cool Edit ... So don't hate ... But I think ya'll will like this better than my other 2 tracks ... So positive feedback is appreciated ... If U didn't like it ... Tell me why ... If U did ... Do the same ... Thanks ...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mentillmusic.htm

It's the top track ... Tell me wat U think ... Peace
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Old 12-18-03, 06:59 PM   #2
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Yoyour vocals were a bit low but your flow was on target....The beat was pretty tight as well...With better production this would be ILL...Liked it second verse was alot clearer though nice piece man...

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Old 12-18-03, 07:50 PM   #3
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what he said, lyrics an' flow were good... the production quality's kinda bad... i'm not real better... so whatever... mentil's verse was str8, 2nd cat has better flow.. but his vocals are toooo low.. overall 6/10, would be 8 if production was better... 1
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