http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...663#post1006663
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100372
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...689#post1006689
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Young! For life
Once again it's the life, yessss
(I don't know why, I.. get so high on)
It's intoxicatin man, y'all don't know why you do what you do
(Get so high on, get so high - high off the life)

[Jay-z]
The allure of breakin the law/
Is always too much for me to ever ignore/
I gotta thing for them big body Benzes, it dulls my senses/
In love with a V-Dub engine/
Man I'm high off life, fuck it I'm wasted/
Bey Venay kicks, or them Marvin Kaye wrists/
My women friend get tennis bracelets/
Trips to Venice, get they winters replaced with/
the sun, it ain't even fun no more I'm jaded/
Man, it's just a game, I just play it to play it/
I put my feet in the footprints left to me/
Without sayin a word, the ghetto's got a mental telepathy/
Man my brother hustled so, naturally/
Up next is me, but what perplexes me/
Shit I know how this movie ends, still I play/
the starrin role in "Hovito's Way"/

[Chorus~Jay-z]
It's just life, I solemnly swear/
To change my approach, stop shavin coke/
Stay away from hoes, put down the toast/
Cause I be doin the most.. oh no!/
But every time I felt that was that......it called me right back/
It called me right back......man it called me right back - oh no!/

[Dixie]
The allure of livin it raw/
Party filled nights,morning fights/
It all feel just right/
That is..until you give up the fight/
Then all the fun is over..or is it?/
Once you got some unfinished business/
But I got encrypted ambitions/
Scared myself with my vicious preminitons/
But this is life..I got to carry steel like Knights/
It's like a double edged knife/
Life's a gamble and I'm just trying to shoot dice/
But truthfully a 7 or 11 would be nice/
I hate it and I love it/
And at one point I put everything above it/
But I don't complain..never be shamed/
I still got pride..never let go until the day I die/
Never catch me with a frown/
But I'm sick and tired*..but I don't get around*/
Niggas purposely act stupid and clown/

[Chorus~Dixie]
It's just life, I solemnly swear/
To change my approach, stop shavin coke/
Stay away from hoes, put down the toast/
Cause I be doin the most.. oh no!/
But every time I try to calm it down......they called me right back/
They called me right back......man they called me right back - oh no!/

[Jay-z]
I never felt more alive than ridin shotgun/
In Cline's green 5 until the cops pulled guns/
And I tried to smoke weed to give me the fix I need/
what the game did to my pulse, with no results/
And you can treat your nose and still won't come close/
The game is a lightbulb with eleventy-million volts/
And I'm just a mark, addicted to the floss/
And doors lift from the floor and the tops come off/
By any means necessary, whatever the cost/
Even if it means lives is lost../
And I can't explain why, I just love to get high/
Drink life, smoke the blueberry sky, blink twice/
I'm in the blueberry 5, you blink three times/
I may not even be alive/
How mean James Dean couldn't escape the allure/
Dyin young, leavin a good lookin corpse/
Of course/

[Chorus~Jay-z]

[Dixie]
December 19th the year was '88/
Marked Dixie's birth date/
I try to escape that day..don't celebrate/
But the allure of the game..shit drives me insane/
So that kind of make me wild on these niggas/
Get pissed off and attack a nigga in the club like Jigga/
So I got to relieve the tension/
Leaving precise incisions right in between yo visions/
Yo spleen will splitten/
until it just seem you listen/
But everytime I try to stay out the kitchen/
They call me right back..they call me right back/
Man that call me right back...OH NO!!!/

GOD DAMNIT
UPPIN THIS SHIT..YOU LAZY BASTARDS
THIS WILL BE MY LAST SONG ON HERE
CUZ IM GONNA GET BANNED

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R.I.P. Bodie

LOVE YOUR NEW NAME BTW

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I'm glad you do.....anyway..uppin this shit..I got about 20 something views...and only post I got in here besides my self wasnt even about my verse
come one!!1

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R.I.P. Bodie

thought it was kinda poetic.....the flow could use some work....and maybe up the vocab a touch.....also the scheme ya got going is a lilsimple....a few decent multis n internals would help it...but as it is....not too bad a collab thought jay-z came better.....jus keep elevatin...pZ

wack.............................................. ......./////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

...I'm not feeling this joint here at all...maybe I'll try later and it could change...probaly not...

Average Piece...At The Most...Nothing Really Stood Out, Vocab Could Have Been Better And Flow Needed Work...It Was Choppy..

Get The Basics Right And Then This Has Potential..

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