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03-20-07, 01:59 AM | #1 | ||
Broke as hell
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Don't See It - Shear Kaughn
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I've been away for a while..but i'm back now.....this isn't my best work...nowhere near it...its been awhile since i been on the mic...but i'm back...yay!!
i'm here in my dorm room......so the quality isn't going to be the best..but bare with me yall Don't See It www.soundclick.com/sherekahn http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151313 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240596
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03-21-07, 10:29 PM | #2 | ||
Light Weight
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what up homie..?
flow is pretty good .. beat is pretty koo..u sound familiar f'real probably heard u on anotha site? but this a pretty nice track homie keep doin ya thing.. p'z 7/10 |
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03-22-07, 09:17 PM | #3 | ||
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shit was illy...kaughnyakillenem
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03-22-07, 11:21 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
not bad your voice sounds a bit different here. Your flow is pretty good and the beat is def hot. I'm feelin your hook, nice little banger shit. some of your last verse was sketchy when you pause I'd rather you just keep goin. but its coo though still fits. your lyrics was hot and the delivery wasn't bad. nice track yo
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240650
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03-23-07, 12:34 PM | #5 | ||
Broke as hell
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i'll return the favor...i sound a bit diff becuase its been a long time since i been in front of the mic....i'm trying to get back in the swing of things
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03-26-07, 01:53 PM | #6 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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Beat is cool
Flow is really nice lyrically you were pretty nice emotion and delivery was nice Only think i can say is your quality but you already know that and maybe switch up the flow a little bit 2nd verse kinda fell off on the flow ]
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03-27-07, 03:12 PM | #7 | |
Addicted
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IP:
this ish was cool the only thing holdin u back is ur quality...and u know that lol ur swagger is lackin but thats proly cuz u aint been on the mic for a while beat is hot delivery flow lyrics was all coo its jus ur quality man lol ight u stay up pz
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03-27-07, 03:15 PM | #8 | ||
Broke as hell
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IP:
yea ima get back in the swing of things....you know how i be...
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