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02-18-05, 05:33 PM | #1 | |
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Rage
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Rage What is this I am feeling, its weird It's one of those things I have always feared I ask her out and she says maybe Does she like me, or is she playing with me I ask her does she like me and again she says maybe I am feeling something, It's not love,confusion or anything like that Your favorite thing in the world, It's like living forever without that It fells like my heart is locked away for eternity in a cage Alone in the darkness, and the only emotion I can feel is rage Dedicated to Tiffany Nicole Lucas |
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02-18-05, 05:40 PM | #2 | |
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upping for positive feedback.
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02-18-05, 06:11 PM | #3 | ||
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good drop i'm feeling this 1 in particular cuz i've been there plenty of times myself i c potential in each & eva poem u write continue 2 represent 4 "Grand Hustlaz"
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02-18-05, 06:13 PM | #4 | |
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02-18-05, 07:27 PM | #5 | |
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uppin.....................
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02-18-05, 07:42 PM | #6 | ||
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not bad. keep it up dawg
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02-18-05, 07:43 PM | #7 | |
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uppin............................................
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02-18-05, 08:22 PM | #8 | |
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02-18-05, 08:31 PM | #9 | |
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uppin for positive feedback on this.
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02-18-05, 10:40 PM | #10 | |
Classic
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Good drop but wit no emotion it shud of been longer just to show your emotion in da poem good structure doei like da verse doe i thoght it waz sweet good drop keep droppin
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02-19-05, 02:55 PM | #11 | |
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uppin...........................
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02-23-05, 11:06 AM | #12 | ||
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This is better than the other one. Good drop on the verse.
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03-19-05, 03:54 PM | #13 | |
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