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Blacksmith | 1 | 25.00% | |
illtalic | 3 | 75.00% | |
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05-06-04, 09:42 AM | #1 | |
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10 lines.
Due asap. House Rules.
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05-06-04, 10:39 AM | #2 | |
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I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss? Another net-whore Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s Spare the nuisance You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it The second error I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new Cussin` me? You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too.
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05-06-04, 10:45 AM | #3 | |
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aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes. im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers. Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'. reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable' this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'. your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last... pz |
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05-12-04, 02:17 PM | #4 | |||
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Is the only line that really stood out inya verse. Had some good ones but this was the best... Casual, some of what you said was cool, I dont know if it was your format but it was hard to read.. no punches really stood out tho... good battle Ima have to go with Blacksmith on this one... Pz O
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05-07-04, 05:51 AM | #5 | |
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05-08-04, 09:26 AM | #6 | |
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IP:
No seriously.
You can vote now.
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05-10-04, 04:46 AM | #7 | |
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05-11-04, 08:31 AM | #8 | |
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Blacksmith I really like your flow and your style. nice flow all together.
return the favor to: taken over vs. lyrical method (vote taken over) vote= Blacksmith |
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05-11-04, 12:58 PM | #9 | ||
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Blacksmith you killed. nice floe 7 punches. your mult's were good too. you had anice floe. Casual you flowed alittle too casual. your verse looked a like ah newbe's. step it up.
vote=Blacksmith Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-12-04, 05:29 AM | #10 | |
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haha 2-0 ..good work phil thought u came real creative here fam
uppin for more votes i guess holla bk |
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05-12-04, 06:03 AM | #11 | |
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Fook you.
1-0. An two wack votes.
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05-12-04, 06:46 AM | #12 | ||
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I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint Good opening Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss? Another net-whore Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s Spare the nuisance This is mediocre for a punch You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it The second error I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it Good punch I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new Cussin` me? You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too Aiight closer aint done this in a minute so check it.. This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes. Good opening im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers. Ok punch Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'. Ha hah ha reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable' I like this one this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'. Nice your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice eh, this was kinda...... you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last... Need a better closing Aiight I'll show ya how it goes Casual-8.5 Blacksmith-9 Casual I really wasn't feeling your flow
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05-12-04, 06:48 AM | #13 | ||
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IP:
Oh shit sorry. My voet don't count. It says I need 200 posts to vote. Ya'll gotta say that before You atrt the bettle. DAMN!
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05-12-04, 07:22 AM | #14 | |
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IP:
LoL@cas-u-hoe..i just realised you changed your name...still aint
gonna hide the fact your loosing mofucca haha..all luv playboy keep the votes commin peeps |
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05-12-04, 01:07 PM | #15 | |
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You`re weak Raymond.
Look at who`s voted for you an the quality of their breakdown. The fuck outta here. `Lyrical Method` and `taken over` have got the same IP`s. I hope you haven`t made alias`. An no it isn`t `all luv`.. watch ya chin Mandela.
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