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Old 02-14-09, 08:21 AM   #1
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Week 5: JTR (2-2) .vs Fly E (1-1)

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: JTR 1 bar
Thursday: Fly E 2 bars
Friday: JTR 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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Old 02-14-09, 10:00 AM   #2
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check check....
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Old 02-16-09, 05:00 AM   #3
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Man this the type of faggot that has some gay tallent
And flicks his wrist on the hardwood more then Ray Allen
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Old 02-17-09, 01:39 PM   #4
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I'm bored from you gay jokes but i'll give you one right back
Jew that Rocks cocks and a different day on someons sack
These expeirenced rhymes you lack like you ballin on a court
Tellin lebron to pull his jock strap off and give em ball support
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Old 02-17-09, 10:45 PM   #5
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why's ya name fly-e? stop it ya grimy, ya not hot, don't get bread...
& the closest you've came to fly are the ones that swarm the top of ya head
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Old 02-17-09, 11:25 PM   #6
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why's ya name fly-e? stop it ya grimy, ya not hot, don't get bread...
& the closest you've came to fly are the ones that swarm the top of ya head

Only punch I thought was Cool really...

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Old 02-17-09, 11:27 PM   #7
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Man this the type of faggot that has some gay tallent
And flicks his wrist on the hardwood more then Ray Allen
played. bitten, flipped, recycled. Which?

I'm bored from you gay jokes but i'll give you one right back
Jew that Rocks cocks and a different day on someons sack
meh ??
These expeirenced rhymes you lack like you ballin on a court
Tellin lebron to pull his jock strap off and give em ball support
this is gay by perspective.

why's ya name fly-e? stop it ya grimy, ya not hot, don't get bread...
& the closest you've came to fly are the ones that swarm the top of ya head
lol ok

v/ JTR by far.
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Old 02-17-09, 11:30 PM   #8
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it's not bitten ya douche lol
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Old 02-18-09, 12:14 AM   #9
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wow i see the real good feed and talent haters.....
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Old 02-18-09, 03:15 AM   #10
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well if you want you can have those votes not count then, im pretty sure out of the next 5 votes that all come in for me, one of them will end up being explained, so no worries here
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Old 02-18-09, 07:19 AM   #11
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Man this the type of faggot that has some gay tallent
And flicks his wrist on the hardwood more then Ray Allen


This was basic, but excuted well

why's ya name fly-e? stop it ya grimy, ya not hot, don't get bread...
& the closest you've came to fly are the ones that swarm the top of ya head

this wasn't that imaginative, but its was fairly descent




I'm bored from you gay jokes but i'll give you one right back
Jew that Rocks cocks and a different day on someons sack


actually, this made me laugh a bit

These expeirenced rhymes you lack like you ballin on a court
Tellin lebron to pull his jock strap off and give em ball support

Nah, this was not hard hitting

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Vote - JTR, for having more consistancy in both this his punches. JTR, you used about 4 wrist punches in TIP. Fly-E, you 1st punch was kinda good, but the 2nd one was not creative enough.
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Old 02-18-09, 10:11 AM   #12
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wasn't really feeling anything, fly your still improving but you have to be able to tell the difference between fresh hard concepts and weak ones, just re-wording wil improve your writing a lot. JTR, you know what to do bu it wasn't coming out hard enough to turn heads, enough for the win but step it up next time.

vote jtr
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Old 02-18-09, 11:37 AM   #13
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ok last two votes were better explained so thanks for the feed.
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Old 02-20-09, 08:38 PM   #14
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Man this the type of faggot that has some gay tallent
And flicks his wrist on the hardwood more then Ray Allen
^lmao
why's ya name fly-e? stop it ya grimy, ya not hot, don't get bread...
& the closest you've came to fly are the ones that swarm the top of ya head
^nahhh

vs

I'm bored from you gay jokes but i'll give you one right back
Jew that Rocks cocks and a different day on someons sack
^nooo
These expeirenced rhymes you lack like you ballin on a court
Tellin lebron to pull his jock strap off and give em ball support
^lol noooo

v/jtr pretty self explanatory
 
Old 02-23-09, 02:56 PM   #15
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JTR wins 3-2

fly E loses 1-2
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