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Kordozar 2 28.57%
Wes City 5 71.43%
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Old 07-18-05, 02:27 PM   #1
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Kordozar vs Wes City

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Reopened - 8/10
 
Old 07-18-05, 02:31 PM   #2
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Old 07-18-05, 02:32 PM   #3
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Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
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Old 07-18-05, 02:33 PM   #4
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Old 07-18-05, 02:43 PM   #5
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You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises


The Detroit Pistons Knocced The Lakers Off Which Is The Wes(t)
His Alias Is New Method And He Does Audio Scream At Me
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Old 07-18-05, 03:17 PM   #6
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Voted For: Wes City

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
8/10 nice opener
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
8/10 nice punch
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
8/10 again nice
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
7/10 good
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
7/10 good
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
8/10 good closer

Overall: 46/60

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
7/10 ok openor
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
9/10 good punch and personals
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
8/10 nice
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
8/10 good punch
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
7/10 ok
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
5/10 weak closer

Overall: 44/60

v/ wes

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Old 07-18-05, 03:32 PM   #7
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Ehh It Wasnt It Explained Cus So Doesn't Count Uppin More Votes!!
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Old 07-18-05, 04:06 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Kordozar
Ehh It Wasnt It Explained Cus So Doesn't Count Uppin More Votes!!

lol dont be a bitch about it.....both verse was good i was feeling both almost equally but if yuou see that wes took it wit hard hittin punhces and personals wit it kodosar didnt have that much hard hittin punches and he lost by two points cuz of it so like i said i vote for wes for a lil better verse keep it up both of you.....you happy i broke down both verses and explained my fuckin vote
 
Old 07-18-05, 09:30 PM   #9
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Who Cares? Uppin More Votes!!!
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Old 07-18-05, 10:45 PM   #10
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that vote is explained out the ying-yang uppin....
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Old 07-18-05, 10:52 PM   #11
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Voted For: Wes City

Wes City - Good spit, it flowed well, and you had some good personals, and hard hitten punches.

Best Line -Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne


Worst Line - NONE

Kordozar - iight spit, it flowed well, nothin that great in it, but you hard some decent punches.

Best Line - You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle

Worst Line - Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises

OVERALL - This battle goes to Wes, he had the better flow, harder punches and more creativity. Kor man, you need some stronger punches and some more thought out shit.

Vote - Wes

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Old 07-19-05, 12:06 AM   #12
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar

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to close to vote...every time i read the verses they cancel each otha out...nice battle
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Old 07-19-05, 01:49 AM   #13
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Uppin For More Votes!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-19-05, 06:41 AM   #14
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wow what a bitch move....you wanna play that way than alright
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Old 07-19-05, 10:16 AM   #15
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Ehh Cus Im Not Gonna Sit Up There And Get Cheated Upping For Votes...
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