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02-12-04, 02:32 PM
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Stayin true to the name.. chyea
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just felt like keyin somethin up
yo on stage its Syck blazin scrypts, spittin only amazin shit my fists grazin lips.. hits have ya eyes squintin like asian kids raps set a fire.. no vets admired come at me you best retire this text is higher.. the latter to evolve? ive stepped it prior on the mic vocal chords explode with one note its so dope leave ya with no hope words stuck inside of ya choked throat nose broke from the first swing, its wackness ya verse brings its worse-ning.. they say im insane becuz i like to hurt things quick drop off the top.. still unstoppable, Syck is not a fool & i'd try to execute right from wrong.. but i forgot the rules foes get dropped in duels, thats right ya heard of my type so bright.. words burnin ya sight with the words that i write so in conclusion ima battle animal.. rippin apart ameteurs scavengers i aint havin ya.. 1 step Syck quick to damage ya |
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02-12-04, 02:40 PM
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MmmmmmmmmK...
Nice little verse... Wordplay was utilized. A meta was thrown in. Flow was on mark... Multi's did their thing. But the topic? Booooooorrrrrrrring! (notice I capitalized the B) Nice intro to ya skills, but Open Mic is really for more meaningful shit... (at least we try and keep it that way) This was a battle verse, plain and simple. A pre-write that you coulda dropped anyone's name into. Nice, but nothing that makes me a fan of yours. Peace
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02-12-04, 02:48 PM
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IP:
if it makes u think any different i did it in less than 10 minutes lol.. thats all it was was an intro.. i was bored.. didnt feel much like a topic or wasting punches.. so it was flow and statement.. thanks for peepin anyhow
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02-12-04, 03:53 PM
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IP:
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02-12-04, 04:18 PM
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replied to like 6 joints cant any of you assholes return a favor.. god damn..
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02-12-04, 05:01 PM
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tight drop. the multies didn't seem forced so thats a big positive.
hot vocab and the structure was near flawless. the topic was nice, but common. but no matter, this made for a great verse. the consistency as well as the metas are commendable. keep writing. pz
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02-12-04, 05:21 PM
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IP:
Flow and rhymes were very good. As an introduction you did what you wanted. Just whatever you do next make it more complex (topic not rhyme scheme). As far as battling goes I would say you've got the skills necessary. I can't say how you do on dropping OM's though until you do. I'll be looking out for your next piece though. So keep writing.
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02-12-04, 08:21 PM
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Flyweight
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people act like its hard to read something and reply to it.. ive replied to quit a few joints
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02-12-04, 08:31 PM
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Intresting keep em coming and have the others running
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02-12-04, 11:06 PM
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IP:
for all the members there are on this site you woudnt know by reading some ones replies...................
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02-13-04, 06:08 PM
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Nice intro peice you dropped nice vocab good shceme and it flows like sewage pipes even tho it wasn't shitty anway good drop
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02-14-04, 02:10 AM
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IP:
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02-14-04, 05:31 AM
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IP:
nice piece here....nice little key
 .....mets were ok...wordplay good....flow better than good... nice intro... drop on a dope topic and show ppl...... peace
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