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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

check..

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...881#post1406881
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...885#post1406885
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...887#post1406887
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...890#post1406890

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check i dunno who spits da lines first? i aint dat good im jus doin dis fo fun...iight go when ya ready i guezz

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

yo dis shit aint even supposed 2 be hot here but imma jus say suntin corny ~!I1I!~

shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin....
1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin....

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Ok Dont Have 2 Try 4 This...But o-well

Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock...
Tha Day He Makes a Punchline??
.................When Shaq Make 3point Shot....

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This was a pretty tight one.

Magician, I think you should have dropped better, cuz that punch was really that great. But it flowed alright I guess. But good try.

Polifik, lol this was tight shit. Nice job wit the Shaq shootin' 3 shit. I liked this one. You didn't try, but it was still a hot punch.

v/Polifik

blah blah... poor wording on the first one, poor concept on the second. pol still wins though.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

shaq made a 3 polifik no beef but dat was dumb 2 say...shaq made a buzza beater 3 when he was in orlando iight ~!i1i!~

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

^^ Wow Once....upp................................

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good shit doe lolz u prolly won so ~!i1i!~

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Da Magician dont forget to vote on 5 battles and edit ur check in with the links....ery link u are missing u get a point deducted from ur points....and the points make up where u r on the rankings...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

polifick nice bar, good flow, concept was wack but it was iight
magician i kno u coulda dropped hotter, it wasnt worded well, good multis but the punch didnt hit, no hate
v/pol

-Damagician7.
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin....
1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin....
coo flow, aight wordplay, aight punch


-Polifick.
Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock...
Tha Day He Makes a Punchline??
.................When Shaq Make 3point Shot....
average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch


Overall, I think Pol got this. He had wittier wordplay and a better worded punch. Mag, yu had too much of the same word/idea in your verse that wrecked your creativity, like shot/shoot, head and basically made another gun line extrememly obvious. Pol, your structure's really annoying, but I can live with it haha. Maybe add a more complex flow next time mayne. Ya still did aight though.


Vote - Polifick.

Vote=Polifick

Magician had a ok punch,but Polifick had a nice punch.Nice wordplay on it.Decent punch.

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I gotta say..pol won this punchline....da magician..u used..head to many times..it mad the 2 lines boring and really weak..polifick..had me laughing after hearing ...the shaq...line lol

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