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09-20-06, 01:51 AM | #1 | |
New Jack
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heat 4 tha hatas
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heat 4 the haters
you coming in this industry is like giving meat to a baker call me a thermal cause i have heat for the haters or you call me october 31st cause i have a treat for the fakers sharp like a razor ,and yall gettin hit like a glacier i aint got time like a broken clock of the wankstas and hateness thats why i try my hardest to act real and not get caught up in the fakeness chin at a obtuse angle to show my head is already high i aint got to get in a jet,plane,or a helicopter cause im already fly niggas dont want to see me make it like watching a sweatty guy yo im untouchable so people compare me to osama bin ladin and the f.b.i ill leave ya girl legs all in the open like being in the public eye claiming that you gangsta is just one mistrusted lie when i say im nice i aint talkin the way i act cause all that hating will get you smacked leave you thinking like T.I song of why you had to do that http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=1#post30806486 |
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09-20-06, 02:33 AM | #2 | ||
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now i bet a lot of peeps gonna on here nsay ur lines look like they runnin but im not dat typelines were a bit stretched but 4 da most part is ayt peep my lyrical hustla i finished it homie
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09-20-06, 05:05 PM | #3 | ||
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i think i already gave you feedback and goodlooking on the feedback even though it was short |
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09-20-06, 03:44 PM | #4 | ||
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this joint was ok, you had some pretty decent bars in there that i was feelin. you should work on ya flow though and makin some of your punches a little more tough. but stay up shawty and hit me back on my joint.....1....
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09-20-06, 05:09 PM | #5 | ||
New Jack
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good looking on the feedback even though i expected my verses to be more than ok |
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09-20-06, 05:12 PM | #6 | |
New Jack
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can i get some more feedback
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09-20-06, 06:24 PM | #7 | ||
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Ay man that was neat yo keep it up man like ol dude said keep da punchlined flowin like doodoo in da rectum ya heard dont let nobody get ya down keep ya head up and pursue ya dream!!
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09-20-06, 08:37 PM | #8 | ||
New Jack
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i feel you,and ima try to keep my head up cause what these niggas say is coming in and out of my ear like sex in the ear ya heard me good looking on the feedback and can i get more feedback |
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09-21-06, 04:14 PM | #9 | |
New Jack
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can i get some more feedback
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09-21-06, 05:51 PM | #10 | |
New Jack
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can i get some feedback from this dead ass site
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09-23-06, 02:09 PM | #11 | |||
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Only thing ya need to work on is your flow. The rest is fine.
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10-05-06, 10:35 AM | #12 | |
New Jack
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can i get some feedback
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10-05-06, 04:37 PM | #13 | ||
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this was ok...flow was ok...
your lines were a lil simple when you would say a line it would start off nice but you didnt deliver to make it a hard punch... 6/10
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10-09-06, 11:58 PM | #14 | |
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son dis was ight, but theres some ish i suggest you work on ya dig? some of your lines wasn't hittin that hot, but some were good. your flow just seems like its off someparts. thats what i would focus on. i see you got some punches and just work on ya wordplay. but you off to a good start mah dude. keep doin you...1...
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