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01-25-06, 12:48 AM | #1 | ||
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New Acapella!! Leave links!!
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The songs is just an acapella on a verse i wrote here's the link and enjoy
the song: http://www.soundclick.com/fotrill links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631670 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631701
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01-25-06, 02:21 PM | #2 | ||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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this shit was dope, quite a few quotable lines, and the closin bar was nasty- track is spoken wordish, kinda reminds me of the acca on the bis 2000 b.c album-
"my 5 fingers said to my dick... ima beat that ass"- "should say peace out, but yall blow like a sneeze, clasp ya dome, squeeze ya teeth out- ya show ya peice out, leave my knees 6 feet in ya feces leak out like a pcp drout" haha i like the way you write, keep droppin
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01-25-06, 02:48 PM | #3 | ||
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pretty dope, I like your flow, the only thing thats a downfall on this was that you can't keep your flow going. You always pause then do that blah blah blah and then pause, try and keep a steady flow man. but it's pretty dope, you have a pretty funny style to the way you write lol. the beans line was funny lol.
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01-25-06, 03:18 PM | #4 | ||
pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
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IP:
why u doin acapella? lol
its pretty good but i cant reall rate ya flow r shit..lyrics r coo, nice emotion n delivery. nice drop.. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103 holla back^^^^^ Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"
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01-25-06, 04:16 PM | #5 | |
Whys That?
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accapellas allways easier to flow, lol.
this is good, a few nice lines that stood out making it more affective. Feed used 1/25/06 "Poetik Karma" Last edited by will appear : 01-27-06 at 04:17 AM. |
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01-25-06, 06:10 PM | #6 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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yoru voice is odd
id liek to hear you rhyme to a ebat alot of quotables id like ot hear you on a track with tito flwo there wasnt a beat to follow so it was prety cool
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01-25-06, 07:49 PM | #7 | ||
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Pretty nice lines in there...
Can't wait to hear an actual track. Good shit. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220491 |
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01-26-06, 01:47 AM | #8 | |||||
The Alternative MC
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yeah those r my fav'S to lol Quote:
then peep my other tracks on soundclick Quote:
Here's the story...i got a big ass box in my room full of rhymes and i was goin through it tryin to find some shit to record and i found this verse which i liked but forgot about and i rapped it...so i was like "this would make a tight acapella" got to the studio and tried to put it to a beat but i wasnt feelin it so i told my man to just press record and i spit it. THANX FOR THE FEED EVERYBODY
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I'M ILLER THAN YOU "Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne "I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill "Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll "Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9" www.soundclick.com/fo'trill |
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01-26-06, 08:05 PM | #9 | ||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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listning......................
voice is ight................................ flow is good seems to be anyway.......................... deleivery is good................ lyrics r sikkness.........funny to .................... yeah i def i wanna hear this track...................... if this was a free your dope.....................if not it was dope anyway Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me"
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01-26-06, 08:29 PM | #10 | |||
The Alternative MC
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LOL no it's not but thanx for the feed
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I'M ILLER THAN YOU "Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne "I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill "Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll "Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9" www.soundclick.com/fo'trill |
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01-26-06, 08:31 PM | #11 | ||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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return tha fav on my fresh like me track please and thank you
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01-26-06, 08:51 PM | #12 | ||
The Alternative MC
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aight thats cool
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I'M ILLER THAN YOU "Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne "I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill "Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll "Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9" www.soundclick.com/fo'trill |
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01-27-06, 09:46 AM | #13 | ||
Middle Weight
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nice multis broken up through out... lacked emotion in parts... fucked with the vocabulary in this... kept the ass ending a bit too long to have no real multis in that section... Lyrically sound for the most part... would like to hear it behind a beat to see how it really flows...
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01-27-06, 11:21 AM | #14 | |||
The Alternative MC
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thanx for the feed
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how so?
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I'M ILLER THAN YOU "Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne "I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill "Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll "Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9" www.soundclick.com/fo'trill Last edited by fo'trill : 01-27-06 at 11:22 AM. Reason: cuz pressed enter on accident |
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01-27-06, 04:32 PM | #15 | |||
Middle Weight
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shit really wasn't broken down in bite size pieces for the idiots that call them selves hip~hop artists... Had a nice use of an extended vocab in this... People tend to say shit as elementary as they possibly can so that everybody listening will get what ever it is they're trying to convey... so 9 times out of ten most of the mainstream shit you hear a kindergardener could interput ... I liked that fact that someone would actually have to think a lil to listen to this...
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