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04-16-03, 03:38 AM | #1 | |
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Sick of Discrimination
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yo this is my first poem..
would help if u guys tell me what ya think So what up?, think you’re cool? Think I suck? This is straight from the heart Don’t really know were to start Sick of mutherfuckers discriminating Can’t walk on the streets without getting some hating Its frustrating,,, my patience is fading Someday my head will explode, Overdosis on Tylenol. Cant walk on da streetz without my gun…”load” Its time to see the other side of the coin Hope with this I can make my point I’ve been humiliated, badly rated, discriminated I cant believe how I’ve manage to made it. And all for not being white or black For being latin, you say, nothing but crap Well fuck all who think like that Like u I love to rap But for doing it I have to carry a huge burden on my back That shit makes a sound in ma soul…and that sound is : “crack” Half white – half black… shit I’m fucked Sadly the world’s divided in two And we don’t belong to either group Like for being born I’ve become a sinner Mom works all day long but her wallet keeps getting thinner Shit I’m just a beginner But what I say I feel, what I say I get out What I get out makes me cleaner Damn it’s the 21rst century.. How can there still be haters? It’s a fucking mystery Not so often a trip a day But when I do, your bullshit comments… take that feeling away.. Scared that someday I might be carried away Do some crazy shit and with an AK make you all pay.. But I don’t wanna fight Nor make ya feel untight But fuck I had to say it And it had to be tonight peace, panamARed |
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04-16-03, 04:37 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
tell what ya'll think..
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04-17-03, 09:07 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
ya piece was cool dawg just as long as u express ya self thats all that matters
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04-19-03, 01:21 AM | #4 | ||
Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP:
Title drew me in, but the words kept me reading. This was long, but it was worth reading. You were just spilling out truthful pains of the heart and I can feel it.
Y'know, I'm half white too. But all in all I consider myself white. For two reasons. One, I look white and everyone around me looks white. And two, because despite whatever you hear about America being a melting pot or the land of the free and all that crap, white people just get plain treated better than everyone else. Unless you're like... some stupid white guy who thinks he's black and you're from Malibu and everyone wants you. I think I'm going to hate that movie. Wow did I go off topic. Anyway, great poem, keep dropping. ~Shalom~ |
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04-20-03, 04:51 PM | #5 | |
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thanx man... I know what i am and i aslo know the truth about america and how people are treted..and it just shouldn't be that way..
well anyways thanks for replying.. peace |
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04-22-03, 02:45 AM | #6 | |
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i dont know why but poetry is not taken seriously into account in this forum..everyone is just concentrated in battling and shit and most of rapbattle.com 's MCs dont give a fuck bout poetry...
that shit sucks ... |
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04-23-03, 12:05 AM | #7 | |
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uppin for some words
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04-24-03, 12:24 AM | #8 | |
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can i get some feedback on this shit?
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04-24-03, 12:57 AM | #9 | |
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ur shit was pre' good
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04-24-03, 03:43 PM | #10 | |
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raw, sharp and to the point...
...vented well, really well....could see you put ya soul into this for sure, the darker, angrier side... ....nothigng else so say, but.. ...resp... |
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04-24-03, 06:01 PM | #11 | |
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deep shit dog
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04-24-03, 06:03 PM | #12 | ||
Straight Savage.
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IP:
that shit was hot dawg, ifeel ya cuz im latino too, ya know
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04-24-03, 06:22 PM | #13 | ||
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IP:
not my typical liking but i mean in retrospect to most emcees this is what they do so respect on that--
Keep writing growth is a promise with persistency Check some of my work out when you get the chance--- -1-
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04-25-03, 08:58 PM | #14 | |
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thanx yall
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04-25-03, 11:34 PM | #15 | |
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i enjoyed this thread
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