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01-18-04, 12:18 AM | #1 | |
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Stars - Sun n' The Moon
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Pure elements - all evident when crystilized developing
Three of them - i'll relish em' - behaviors malevolent Call it my glow - shine to remind - rewinding the time Changing my range - all trapped in a cage - torn inside - But these three things'll uplift in any occurance I alway turn to em' - these moments of disturbance... When I pray in my bed - release of the stress Gaze through the sky roof no longer mislead With change brought about - each star that blazes With the trails left behind - which infact erases.. Thoughts along with it - my mentalities struck n' That buck - I said fuck it eventually a ruckus Just some tough love - tough luck - and just maybe The black stary night life will ease of the crazies Constellated youth - with a craving to save thee When they're aligned correctly - they're what make me The vision i'm seein' - just a glare in my views Facts of life bleeding - ya'll won't fare in my shoes Staring - i'm loose - the tension will ease back My seeds increase - fuck crack n' that's that.. Layin back - stay low - if ya'll say so - i'm all pro The rays - golden sequences' mine for the takin' yo.. As warmth spreads - the picture perfect baring My wings spread - victorious - nothin' comparing The sun may distract - i'll stay click clat The blind may see - crippled'll walk - faulty shall fall.. A brighter day follows it all.. But this needs no explanations - it's always there Guiding me in presence - never disappear Fear left ancient - ain't debatin' - heart embraces Not only that - the moon fills my soul infact - But the elements all evident - make me whole - in that - Whatever comes my ways abolished All the faces stay astonished..
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01-18-04, 12:30 AM | #2 |
This is my first post!
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IP:
yo great peice
first verse was great lots of multis, dont give a shit about struct its great anyways. real personal or so u make it seem. 9/10 keep that shit up. great peice.
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