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04-25-03, 07:03 PM | #1 | |
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first spit
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yo this is me spitting at my boy kronox just for fun, what do ya'll think?
my punches leave your bitch ass seeing stars// cause like a surgeon with parkinsons i'll leave you with scars/ you battling me is like holding a metal pole in a thunderstorm// cause my flows are deadly like chemical weapons gaseous form// you think your a gangsta son, god damnit your dutch!// your flows plus punches plus rhymes plus style, oh dear... doesnt amount to much// even showing up, its like your trying to fail// you'll get fucked quicker than your first shower in jail// damnit son its over, case closed, i'm through// throwin in the towel is all thats left for you to do// peace [edit] yo and before you get to critical this was freestyle not like contemplated written shit [/edit] |
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04-26-03, 02:39 AM | #2 | |
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lol that was prety funny. needs to be a little longer and could be a little more complex
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04-26-03, 10:27 AM | #3 | |
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uppin for more comments
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04-26-03, 02:06 PM | #4 | |
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hahah Combatjoe my boy
You having fun yet ? Let's set up a battle for fun ? Nice first verse tho I allready read it on IRC |
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04-27-03, 08:26 AM | #5 | ||
.-.Marxism.-.
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lmao... for once someone with some talent comes to rb...
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05-01-03, 03:10 PM | #6 | |
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It was ight
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05-08-03, 11:13 AM | #7 | |
BANNED
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yo man u shouid be proud of yourself
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05-15-03, 11:21 PM | #8 | |
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If that was truely freestyle, then that was pretty good, nice multis, wish I can see the full verse but "damnit" good start
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Ur not wack................ I'm just better .:IJL:. reppin strong, wurdshizle |
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05-15-03, 11:25 PM | #9 | |
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yea good shit for a first time
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05-16-03, 01:53 PM | #10 | ||
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Ummmmm...needs work, kinda Basic....Go see battling 101 for good tips on how to elevate....
Other than that, it was straight for a newbie.....Final Answer Closed |
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