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03-30-07, 07:34 PM | #1 | ||
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Am I Dreamin ft. Prahject
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Produced by my dude matt aka mischief
1st n 2nd verse is me, Prahject on the 3rd verse. Sample hook wit me over top www.myspace.com/thatniccatonyb Leave links, all favors will be returned
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03-30-07, 07:36 PM | #2 | ||
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240952
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240431
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03-30-07, 09:38 PM | #3 | ||
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yo this track is nice..........ya flow is on point...beat is strate nasty........ya stuck to the topic...i'm feelin it........the only thing i can say is up ya quality..turn up the vocals......cuz once it hit prah'ject u could hear him........but then again it could just be myspace, it messes wit ya quality......overall pretty solid track......
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03-30-07, 10:40 PM | #4 | ||
The Paragraph President
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I'm feelin the beat, nice and mellow. Not bad flow Tony but your vocals are really low, up them up man your voice so soft its hard to hear you lol. It's not a big problem though, your lyrics is coo and the quality is coo. Hook is pretty straight forward i believe. Nice vibe on it though tony. for prahject he does his shit always, i never really heard him flop as of lately he been really hot on anything he does. overall pretty coo track yall! keep it raw
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...566#post3153566
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03-31-07, 08:33 PM | #5 | ||
Fuck Parents
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iight just got back home, ima hit up your track in a bit
bump
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03-31-07, 09:35 PM | #6 | ||
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rtf if ya could fam....gettin mad slept on...... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240728
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04-01-07, 07:58 PM | #7 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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beat is real mellow
flow was kinda off on this beat...kinda bouncy...but it's the equivalent of clapping on the down beat instead of the up beat... Don't like how you rode it hook is decent Prah...flows to this beat better...pretty standard fare not great not bad 1 |
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04-01-07, 09:37 PM | #8 | ||
Light Weight
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240758 iight feelin this beat. not my type but its nice 1st verse pretty decent pretty good flow to it, lyrics go nice nice lil classy hook feel that verse 2 - just as nice as the first no major switch ups... verse 3 - flowin real nice on this feel this one lyrics on point too nice track fellas feel this for a mixtape 7/10 |
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04-02-07, 09:08 AM | #9 | ||
Fuck Parents
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thx for all the feed
jay ima get at your track when i get home. im n school right now.....
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04-02-07, 12:10 PM | #10 | ||
ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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1st verse pretty STR8, KOO FLOW
im feeling that hook brova verse 2 - kept it simple, but it works for you fam verse 3 is my favorite, dude came off for real, sound like he should be up there with me overall nice track b...keep at it, ya dig DaC |
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04-04-07, 05:53 PM | #11 | |||
The Most Feared Gang!
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whatup we talked before once, we were mena do a jawn way back but my shit got messd up..holla @ me tho aim: intermental2 dolla back
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04-03-07, 11:34 PM | #12 | |
I don't lose
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ight well the beat has a nice vibe to it...but i dont like the sample in the hook, actually i dont really like the hook....your flow on this is okay in spurts but it feels like you gotta slow it down a bit more....your quality is still somethin you gotta work on....prah's quality sounds better then his usual put next to yours....haha i do have to crown prahject the adlib king...haha its def is trademark...haha....never fails....pretty good average verse from him....not a bad peice....but still room left to improve
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