these are $5 each
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/u...ctionsmusic.htm

uppin

^^^LOL that 2nd one is ok

he sent me a rough draft and both those are 5 mins worth of work using fruity loops ..........while half asleep too..................

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fruity loops make your beats sound like sum techno shit and the drums sound cheap as hell. i think they are good and ILL-mental how long have you been making beats...way longer then me or crysis have.

Broken Dreams - the drums is alright, but the sounds u used could be improved . the plink plonk throughout the melody is shit though.

That's life - Drum sounds still suck but the melody was better. Still basic n slow flowin though.

try addin an extra kicks in between the main kick n the snare now n then to make it bounce a bit. also, unless the main instrument/sample u use for the melody is extremely dope then add more elements to give the track a larger sound.

basically u need to collect better sounds n go from there. keep at it yo.

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these beats were good...but i dont kno shit about beats

The second beat is dope fuh sho

i wanna buy it, pm me or sumthin

holla atchya boy!

clean out your pm box

or if you got aim hit me up

thugedoutkracka2

if not its coo...just clean out your pm box

Broken Dreams...quality of the drums isnt great...bass is nice but damn i gotta agree with Phate that sound is horrible and must go
overall its not bad needs to be touched up a bit

Pz

my pm box is cleaned out so hit me up

ive been making beats for like 2 years........lol

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yo hit me up!!!! i'll give ya $5 dollaz for dat second beat fuh sho