http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192310
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191390
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this is juss a collab wit my S.I.C. crew member from my city........and da beat is by my homeboi Proper-T........if ya want to buy any of his beats check out his site: www.soundclick.com/bands/8/propertmusic.htm


http://rideinconline.com/play.php?b...&mode=song_hifi
or
http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/

'preciate u listenin and any feedback is welcomed.............


pz

~1~

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ya'll dun sleep on this.........

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YO Uppin this.............................................. .........

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Listening...

Im feeling this beat...Pretty emotional

Vocals need to be turned up a lil bit...Quality isn't all that...Lyrics are decent, but there is alot of room for improvement.

Flow is slow...

5/10

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'preciate da feedback fam........

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beat is diff, i dont like it doe
quality needs to be upped, beat volume needs to go down
Flow is really bad.. i see how u wanna flow, but it aint working
delievery is really boring, not very enjoyable to listen too.
Lyrics are very basic. and you lines are too short, you pasuing unnessecary

Same for the hook, not too good

2/10

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thanx fo da feedback.......................................

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yo uppin this.............................................

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