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12-06-06, 02:02 PM | #1 | ||||
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Crazy Lager - Mad Dog
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Crazy Lager
lyrics are on the myspace page too (just in case). top track it should automatically play...hope you enjoy links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3118899 & http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3118901
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12-06-06, 02:50 PM | #2 | |
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listening: beat sounds weird lol, like your flow alot, fast and dope, wonder is theres snares lol, nice hook, nice track seriously, pretty original, IMO its your best track so far, quality is not bad, maybe you should put your volume louder( the vocal ) second verse is better, *DOWNLOADED*
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12-06-06, 03:48 PM | #3 | |
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im feelin this tune you ride on this beat real nice like
this beats tuff i love it... man this shits original for real man everyone can relate to that cos everyones let alcohol get on top of them lool...don' t think the US heads gonna understand some of the slang though but meh who cares? lol good shit for real |
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12-06-06, 04:13 PM | #4 | ||
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Listening...
Beat is hype. I like it. Flow is fast and matches the beat. Lol this track is nice man...like the hook. Shit's pretty funny. No complaints really man...other than teh qualtiy. You should really really invest in another mic. You would sound so much better. I want a beer now. Good shit man. |
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12-07-06, 03:45 AM | #5 | ||||
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cheers for the feed so far, uppin
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12-07-06, 11:09 AM | #6 | ||||
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ja ja binks....
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12-08-06, 04:08 AM | #8 | ||||
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cheers man...uppin
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12-08-06, 01:18 PM | #9 | |
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ight finally got some free time.....first thing that hits me is the dubs are like 3 milla seconds behind or so......a lil off......the levels on the hook should be fixed up a bit with the yeah at the end.....beats a lil simple....you did good ont he fast flow tho......not bad....some good stuff but you know that im just here to help you with the stuff that needs work....peace
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12-08-06, 01:24 PM | #10 | ||
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Guten Tag, mein klein Schwein
Alright, figured I'd leave ya some detailed feedback. To be real with you, I ain't feeling the beat. But your flow brings it to another level for me personally. I liked the pace you had going on. The delivery coulda been a little bit stronger IMO though but nothing to be very worried about, could be fixed with some extra vocals or such. The lyrics...well...amusing that's for sure haha. I'm rethinking that "lets go for a drink" thing now though haha, nah jk. The hook is catchy but you could have brought it out more with stronger mixing. Solid drop!
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12-08-06, 04:45 PM | #11 | ||
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Listenin'...lol at ya intro..real brittish hooligan shit huh?...fast flow is koo...but ya dubbs are off b..they need be overlay good..delivery is good...hook is catchy after a while..lyrics koo i cant get em all cos of ya dubbs b...keep doing ya shit fam...fast flow koo..do u fam..1
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12-09-06, 05:57 AM | #12 | ||||
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deffo appreciate the feed i got so far...thanks peeps...keep it coming
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12-14-06, 04:00 AM | #13 | ||||
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uppin .
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12-29-06, 05:52 AM | #14 | ||||
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might as well up again innit
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12-30-06, 07:40 AM | #15 | ||||
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and again...should be dropping something new soon
might even throw another verse on this
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