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Judicial 1 16.67%
Kamikazee 5 83.33%
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Old 02-01-05, 03:36 PM   #1
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Old 02-01-05, 03:38 PM   #2
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Old 02-01-05, 03:54 PM   #3
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U should get smacked first off for having a rap name like judicial,
Cuzz ur style is wack, yall aint never heard of it because its artificial
U got a slim chance of winning dis battle like whites at a black college,
Choked up are we? Your dumbass cant think because i froze ur knowledge
You reppin one of da best crews, u aint good dont know how u got in the jury,
But after i get done wit u, i'll have ur hole crew feeling Twizted Government fury
Its jus our grand opening for T.G., and we already starting to dimolish ur career,
Nobody desided to volunteer, so i stood up and repped T.G. and made u disappear
Got yall shook off da name kamikazee, dis verse will catch ur eye and hynotize,
Claiming yall da best, jus proved yall wrong and bout to send u home wit them lies
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Old 02-01-05, 06:34 PM   #4
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Old 02-01-05, 08:43 PM   #5
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opener:
ima rip off ya skull cap and spit ill thoughts 2 ya brain
and let u drool at ya mouth,da only way u spit hot game

killer:
scorchin..lyrics.scratches ta holes with blood pourin
decapitate,gut lacerate, and donate dis faggots organs
verbally murder u but whisper so i wont get arrested
10/10 punches all conected n at da end left ya breathles

killer(again):
yo i heard how it is...dat insest in West Virgina
reppin da girl in ur avy...but kami is dat ur sista?
dis is bout "The Jury" fuck a Twisted leadership
we iz "revolutionury",think u hot,well i just spit meaner-shit
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Old 02-01-05, 08:53 PM   #6
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good verse cuzz and goodluck...........uppin dis shit
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Old 02-01-05, 08:55 PM   #7
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definite win for jud.....kamikazee used too much self glorification and not enuff personlas or punches, the punches that WERE there were pre school....jud had better vocab opener punchjes, everything....both people could have improved by having more multies....this was 1 sided the whole way.....

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Old 02-01-05, 09:00 PM   #8
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thanks uppin dis shit...yeh ur verse was good too....i was like damn when i saw it....
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Old 02-01-05, 09:51 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Judicial

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Good drop from both head'z...good luck on the polls peace
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Old 02-01-05, 11:27 PM   #10
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Voted For: Kamikazee

Kamikazee
structure is ok.. some of ur lines are stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the partial stretchness.. u had a few multis.. u attempted wordplay, but some of it didnt connected.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. u had one attempted personal..

Judicial
structure was good.. flow was on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it was all garbage.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Judicial had the better structure and flow.. neither had good personals.. Kamikazee had more multis.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that, Kamikazee gets my vote..

VOTE - KAMIKAZEE
 
Old 02-01-05, 11:53 PM   #11
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iight iight tied up.....uppin dis battle yalll....~1~drop a link for returned votes
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Old 02-01-05, 11:59 PM   #12
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Voted For: Kamikazee

Close Battle.If I Could Vote A Tie I Would Have But The Only Thing That Seperated The Verses Was Judicials' Style Sorta.He Had Some Creative Lines But He Jus Talked Throughout His Verse.Basically Running His Mouth But Not Really Saying Anything.Kami Stayed On Topic With His And Had Some Tight Personals.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 02-02-05, 06:58 AM   #13
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^^^i dont see how u stay on topic when dis not even a topical battle yo...ne ways uppin
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Old 02-02-05, 03:03 PM   #14
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.....................................uppin........ .............................
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Old 02-02-05, 05:06 PM   #15
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Naw......the kid was talking about "topical battle". This ain't a "topical" battle, dq that vote.
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