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06-25-05, 04:01 AM | #1 | ||
New to RV
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Speak Up Bitch (diss)
IP:
links to tracks i left feed on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2239239 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196754 "speak up bitch" http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2569356&q=hi http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2569356&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/down....cfm?ID=2569356 This kid Fatal’s a nobody… bitch i'm ill as hell you'd only live up to your name if you killed yourself Fatal cmon dawg, You’re to basic to mess wit me I’m eliminating Fate(al) like i was erasing your destiny fans want blood… I'm givin em more primitive gore your body's hittin the floor with every ligament torn so what you dissin me for? didn't you listen before? your verses have weak structure like buildings missin a floor you ain’t bustin the heat, bitch you ain’t nothing to me you’ll get punched in the cheek for spittin something this weak you're constantly pausin... don't rush when you speak cuz your breath control stinks, try brushin yah teeth I’m never fearin this cat, I’ll shove a spear in his ass He’s sucks so bad even his family is cheerin for graff this queer is just whack… your delivery’s so bad that I should get free pizza just for hearin yah track! This kids weak as hell, I’m Leavin this silly ho maimed I mean you gotta be kidding me, are you really so plain? I’ve seen your text… Your punches are shitty, so lame While GRaFFiK’s amaze you like high budget video games Keep thinking yah slick, even winkin at chicks Whatever floats your boat, but then i'm sinkin your ship If you’re thinking you’re big then I’m shrinkin you kid Cuz your style ain’t workin like the link in your sig kinda rushed but fuck it tried some new stuff with my flow/delivery too leave some feedback and things i can work on
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Rapdemon: i can be your groupie of the week! xGRaFFiK NaTuREx: lol |
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06-25-05, 04:08 AM | #2 | ||
You Love My Style.
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IP:
Am feelin the beat...
Flow was cool, u sound young, punches was there..flow was on and off but overall decent diss Return feed. "Invektive Diss"
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06-26-05, 01:18 AM | #3 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
uppin for some feedback
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Rapdemon: i can be your groupie of the week! xGRaFFiK NaTuREx: lol |
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