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08-05-07, 08:47 PM
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'The Rode of My Life'
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This lil verse is called 'The Rode of My Life' im workin on it!
listen up......ayo im tryin to find my WAY TO ACHIVE, but every move im MAKIN IT SEEMS like im doin it with WEIGHTS ON MY FEET, and i feel like every dude's HATIN ON ME, and im tryin to follow the RIGHT ROAD with no LIFE BOAT and theres a LAKE IN THE STREET/ pluss i have the SHAKIEST DREAMS that WAKES ME FROM SLEEP, and my head hurts and my chest ACHES WHEN I BREATH/ i think gods WAITIN FOR ME... im tryin to LIVE RIGHT, but i LIVE LIFE so DANGEROUSLY its like im RUNNIN AROUND and every GUN IN THE TOWN is AIMIN AT ME, i think they tryin to CHANGE MY BELIVES as im just tryin to STAY ON MY FEET this road is a LONG SWERV and every WRONG TURN is AIMIN AT BEEF, and thats no STRANGER TO ME, but i dont need no one WAIVIN POLICE and SAYIN ITS ME, so thats why i dont try and get BRAVE WITH THE HEAT, i just LAY ON MY KNEES and keep PRAYING FOR PEICE.....damn/
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08-06-07, 12:02 PM
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This was Actually a Pretty Tight Drop...I Like How It Flowed....Overall Tho It Was Cool
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08-06-07, 12:11 PM
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Thanx for the feed F@me good lookin!
More Feedbak pleeze!
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08-06-07, 01:08 PM
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nicely said...flowed smooth....good with the multis.....~1~
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08-06-07, 01:10 PM
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Thanx for the feed K-M!
Good Lookin! Uppin for more Feedback!
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08-06-07, 06:53 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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Nice drop, the flow was dope. One thing though, it's hard for people to read big blocks of text. Next time try to structure it something like this:
listen up......ayo im tryin to find my WAY TO ACHIVE, but every move im MAKIN IT SEEMS like im doin it with WEIGHTS ON MY FEET, and i feel like every dude's HATIN ON ME, and im tryin to follow the RIGHT ROAD, with no LIFE BOAT and theres a LAKE IN THE STREET/ pluss i have the SHAKIEST DREAMS that WAKES ME FROM SLEEP, and my head hurts and my chest ACHES WHEN I BREATH/ i think gods WAITIN FOR ME... im tryin to LIVE RIGHT, but i LIVE LIFE so DANGEROUSLY its like im RUNNIN AROUND and every GUN IN THE TOWN is AIMIN AT ME, i think they tryin to CHANGE MY BELIVES as im just tryin to STAY ON MY FEET this road is a LONG SWERV and every WRONG TURN is AIMIN AT BEEF, and thats no STRANGER TO ME, but i dont need no one WAIVIN POLICE and SAYIN ITS ME, so thats why i dont try and get BRAVE WITH THE HEAT, i just LAY ON MY KNEES and keep PRAYING FOR PEICE.....damn/
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08-06-07, 07:03 PM
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Yah i understand thanx for the feed dawg!
Good Lookin out! More feebak pleeze!
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08-06-07, 07:32 PM
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The Alien Toung
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did u mean road??
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08-06-07, 08:02 PM
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wat do u meen did i meen road?
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08-06-07, 08:08 PM
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Must not Sleep; Must Warn Others
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You spelled that shit wrong dumbass.
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08-06-07, 08:11 PM
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IP:
ooo kay thanx for the feed bak homie! lmao!
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08-07-07, 12:31 AM
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The Alien Toung
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yeah...diddnt wana be so blunt...
but i never seen no one misspell that shit.... diddnt wana be a dick tho.... and WOW @ cads sig...that shits illy like whoa
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08-07-07, 12:18 PM
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Yah its coo thanx for the Feed!
Good lookin out! More Feed Pleeze!
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08-07-07, 03:21 PM
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B.I.G.
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hey cool shit bro
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08-07-07, 03:34 PM
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IP:
Thanx for the feed bak!
Uppin for more holla at it!
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