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04-03-07, 02:57 PM | #1 | |
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Martyr Art
IP:
between the ambiance
of melancholy and double bass guerrilla symphony- this suit of blooming dynamite with fusing cuffs -wears like an Armani tux. he painted his easel beneath a peace of shrapnel. croshea a civil signature: embroidered in braille fashioned entropy- by the threaded hairpin; he spits the quills to dot the eyes- and watch the kill. with a stroke of grenade -he's to be displayed against the age of reason, below the cranial splinter of amputee and misinterpretation. it was called his magnum opus- below the sprawling shrapnel and teflon gulps. he spit his blood on the walls, and framed the gravestone in bullet holes for all. the shells powder canvas; reigning down beneath a cloud of mag clips and falling rounds- this is lust. this is the day he holds his heart- and the artist is left red handed in the capillaries of black mondays self-expression: paint and blood strokes close- holding his breath against a question mark. tourniquet highways for the guerilla to spill his oil- abstract with paint filled gauze and starter flame he illustrates turmoil. he's to follow his heart- choking on the murmurs, he creates serrated canvas and disorder -under grenade hearts, their signature carved: martyr art. |
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04-13-07, 08:55 AM | #2 | |
New to RV
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IP:
This was pretty good actually , I wasnt feeling it at first but then I got into it
vocab was quite good throughout some visuals where good others, pretty solid drop Peace. |
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