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Old 04-03-04, 11:35 PM   #1
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Exclamation Who Am I Freestyle (Disgustin Punchlines)

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dis a freestyle i did over the who am i beat last summer, just releasin it now, i be wildin when i spit, but let me kno what yall think tho...

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Old 04-04-04, 12:30 PM   #2
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this was iight, you got good flow but i couldnt hear/understand nothin really

awkward rhyme scheme...sounded pretty good simple and short...props
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Old 04-04-04, 01:20 PM   #3
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nothing special, ive heard much better

but at least you could flow without studdering
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Old 04-04-04, 07:55 PM   #4
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Listening....

How was this a punchline track.??? The only punchline/joke was that this was supposably gonna be sick. You gotta be crazy...Ya flow would be hot to certain beats. But you try to hard. and the flow is straight garbage. Im not feeling the beat. The Concept. Everythign sorry. Keep Spittin.... One
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Old 04-05-04, 01:04 AM   #5
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good lookin, it was a freestyle, im thinkin bout doin it over, writin it down, fixin it up an all dat.
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Old 04-06-04, 06:41 PM   #6
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any thing else?
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Old 04-14-04, 05:11 AM   #7
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U Erased The Comments?? That I Said To U Nigga
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Old 04-17-04, 11:59 AM   #8
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no nigga this is a different site, go look on the other one.
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Old 05-04-04, 04:32 PM   #9
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lol that was preety koo try and make it betta
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Old 05-04-04, 08:57 PM   #10
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UGh. .... you need a better mic because a lot of that was blurred. had to turn my headphones pretty high to scan out the static.

the parts that I did hear clearly were pretty good thourgh. expand with v2.!
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Old 05-05-04, 03:05 PM   #11
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good lookin, yea i got a better mic now, i tried re recordin but i cant get the same feel for it
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Old 05-05-04, 05:58 PM   #12
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hmm... i dont love the flow, there is a lot or repeating in the rhyming.. i mean, its alright def nothin special. but keep it up. checkin some other tunes on your site now.
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Old 05-05-04, 07:55 PM   #13
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NICE!!!! lol good freestyle. i like to hear real freestyles on websites. too many cats saying its a real freestyle when it aint!!!

good work fam imma chekc out your other hits
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Old 05-08-04, 11:53 PM   #14
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NICE!!!! lol good freestyle. i like to hear real freestyles on websites. too many cats saying its a real freestyle when it aint!!!

good work fam imma chekc out your other hits



word man you can kind of tell when its a real freestyle and when its not.. you seemed to have been really freestyling on this song.. the beat was nice man.. but the rhymes werent that hot.. i know it was a freestlye but it wasnt that hot man.. keep them comming though
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Old 05-06-04, 03:10 PM   #15
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good lookin dog, i feel u on what u sayin about people makin pretend freestyles
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