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Old 05-29-07, 10:49 AM   #1
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Round 3: don cardyac 1-1 .vs 2v 1-1

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Battles Up Tuesday.
House Rules 10-14 lines
Verses Due Friday.
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Old 05-29-07, 12:26 PM   #2
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check in....................
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Old 05-29-07, 02:28 PM   #3
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CHECK In... LOLZ I HOPE YOU AINT DOPE LIKE DAT LAST HEAD I GOT DAYUM HE DOPE LAWL.
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Old 05-31-07, 09:30 AM   #4
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dude listen, you must be on mo pot than stove tops in soup kitchens//
put the duce(gun/2) to ya eye, now you got a 2 vision//
you aint seein' me lyrically anyway, so what'chu visionin' for?//
i'll cut both ur pupils in half and turn your vision to(2) 4//
as for(4) that i'll chop them in half than lyrically get'chu ate(8), &//
do the math on that, we aint equal, no available equation//
get it?,after that'chu know you hurtin' man// *hahaha*
u live by me,so now i can say that i've bodied-more(balti/body-more) in murderland(MD)//
its gonna take more than one(2+) to take me down, but'chu(1) willin'?//
its an exact metaphor of your name, 1 dimensional, but yet 2 visions//
you finished, time to stick 'em & see if he still bleedin'(food)//
pull 'em out the oven(battle) and let the btr family get ta feastin'//
and nowonder you named ur album that, its no secret//
cuz all you do is suck&blow(head) just like a weed hit//
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/
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MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460
 
Old 06-01-07, 07:14 PM   #5
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Don, ya whack, had to say it fast 'cuz I'm personal when bust raps,
& I don't find you threatening, even tho 14/14 of ya lines was just that.
..... Let's all laugh at this fake fuck, I got the shotgun, still loaded an,
I'd be cockin' your brain but I don't wanna make it feel whole again.......
My wordplay is gold, contradiction but he'll be scarred for the worst//
And It's like you dropped 14 fake lines, with 28 REAL bars in your verse//
Rofl.. DON, in MY state? Fuck it I'll rip this kid into sheets,
With card all over the place, 52 people have a chance of gettin' a piece.
I laugh, smile, and strut, how this fag's mild as fuck,
With everyone of his punches below the waist, 'cuz naturally trash piles up.
That's 10 lines that I keyed, you think you'll match me when I speak more reason?
Please give me a RE-RE-RE-match with this guy so I can keep him cut from the
league for SEASONS..
Fuckin' with 2v, that's like treason, I see through this kid when I pass,
Like I'll knock his lights out, break ya chin and my fist's covered in glass.

out.
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Old 06-02-07, 12:00 AM   #6
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My wordplay is gold, contradiction but he'll be scarred for the worst//
And It's like you dropped 14 fake lines, with 28 REAL bars in your verse//
..... Let's all laugh at this fake fuck, I got the shotgun, still loaded an,
I'd be cockin' your brain but I don't wanna make it feel whole again.......



.vs


Nothing.


V/2v. By Far.
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Old 06-02-07, 10:11 AM   #7
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I laugh, smile, and strut, how this fag's mild as fuck,
With everyone of his punches below the waist, 'cuz naturally trash piles up.

vs.

nothing

v/2v
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Old 06-02-07, 07:19 PM   #8
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I wanna vs. one of the two people who voted on this battle lol
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Old 06-02-07, 10:21 PM   #9
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did y'all see the wordplay and andpunches i used? if y'all aint notice, those numbers that i used in the verse actually added up to make sence. it must've went over y'all heads.
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/
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MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460
 
Old 06-02-07, 11:26 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by don cardyac
did y'all see the wordplay and andpunches i used? if y'all aint notice, those numbers that i used in the verse actually added up to make sence. it must've went over y'all heads.


OMG you can do math!
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Old 06-02-07, 10:22 PM   #11
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reread my verse actually adding the numbers etc. than y'all gone see what i'm sayin'
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Old 06-02-07, 10:33 PM   #12
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^we Get what you sayin man. Its not over any ones heads.

But the way that you try and show what your sayin by puttin quotes on it
or puttin it in commas..Basically just tryin to explain what your sayin. Thats what throws ya verses off.
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Old 06-02-07, 10:43 PM   #13
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i get what'chu saying. i just do it cuz people often say that they don't get what i'm tryna say and when i break it down they be like, "oh damn, well your s*** actually did make a lot of sence." so i do it just to stay on the safe side cuz i dont know if the judge is gonna get it or not.
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/
DRAMA GANG established 2005



MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460
 
Old 06-02-07, 10:45 PM   #14
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iite thanks for the advise. good match.
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/
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MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460
 
Old 06-03-07, 11:38 AM   #15
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dude listen, you must be on mo pot than stove tops in soup kitchens//
put the duce(gun/2) to ya eye, now you got a 2 vision//
decent start...
you aint seein' me lyrically anyway, so what'chu visionin' for?//
i'll cut both ur pupils in half and turn your vision to(2) 4//
aight...
as for(4) that i'll chop them in half than lyrically get'chu ate(8), &//
do the math on that, we aint equal, no available equation//
nah didnt rhyme or connected...
get it?,after that'chu know you hurtin' man// *hahaha*
u live by me,so now i can say that i've bodied-more(balti/body-more) in murderland(MD)//
dont explain yaself in ya bar it mess up your structure and flow...
its gonna take more than one(2+) to take me down, but'chu(1) willin'?//
its an exact metaphor of your name, 1 dimensional, but yet 2 visions//
eeh could of been worded different... but aight..
you finished, time to stick 'em & see if he still bleedin'(food)//
pull 'em out the oven(battle) and let the btr family get ta feastin'//
nah...
and nowonder you named ur album that, its no secret//
cuz all you do is suck&blow(head) just like a weed hit//
aight ending...

i've seen way better from you... you focused to much on hes name should of had like 1 or 2 bars about hes name then switch toy our regular self....




Don, ya whack, had to say it fast 'cuz I'm personal when bust raps,
& I don't find you threatening, even tho 14/14 of ya lines was just that.
aight start...
..... Let's all laugh at this fake fuck, I got the shotgun, still loaded an,
I'd be cockin' your brain but I don't wanna make it feel whole again.......
lol gay-line but decent...
My wordplay is gold, contradiction but he'll be scarred for the worst//
And It's like you dropped 14 fake lines, with 28 REAL bars in your verse//
nah weak..
Rofl.. DON, in MY state? Fuck it I'll rip this kid into sheets,
With card all over the place, 52 people have a chance of gettin' a piece.
aight..
I laugh, smile, and strut, how this fag's mild as fuck,
With everyone of his punches below the waist, 'cuz naturally trash piles up.
aight...
That's 10 lines that I keyed, you think you'll match me when I speak more reason?
Please give me a RE-RE-RE-match with this guy so I can keep him cut from the
league for SEASONS..
aight..
Fuckin' with 2v, that's like treason, I see through this kid when I pass,
Like I'll knock his lights out, break ya chin and my fist's covered in glass.
aight ending...

vote: 2v for being more creative with hes verse... still lacked a bit but had a few decent punches....
don you focus to much on hes name which hurt you at the end...


vote: 2v
 
 


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