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09-15-05, 03:56 PM | #1 | ||
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"A Hood Prayer" - Intermental
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Check this out recorded today also, called Hood Prayer
second track: a hood vibe www.soundclick.com/intermental 2nd track http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208197 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207948
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09-15-05, 05:11 PM | #2 | ||
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What up? It's the kid Young Franchize. I peeped ya track and... Lyrics are good, but you just need to work on ya delivery. Sometimes too many words were in a line and you rushed, Ya digg? So just work on that homey... Im out \\uNo//
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09-15-05, 05:15 PM | #3 | ||
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Ite thanks man, you got a soundclick?
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09-15-05, 05:27 PM | #4 | ||
a.k.a Young Franchize
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ya man... www.soundclick.com/yungfranchize
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09-16-05, 04:37 PM | #5 | ||
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Yo uppin this hurr/////////
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09-16-05, 04:51 PM | #6 | ||
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dont like this beat... your mic is extremely staticy, yeah your flow needs work, sum of your lines are too long n others too shorts... presence lacks, cos of this your delivery is ass(sorry if i sound harsh) lyrics are ok, nothing special but served a purpose... jus keep practicing man. safe.. RTF on the heist and/or tony green diss(links in sig)
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09-17-05, 06:20 AM | #7 | |
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I agree with Franchise, sometimes, you put too many words in one line...That's either delivery or lyrics...u can go back and rewrite it to fit better, or devise a way to flow it to fit better...ur choice
I like ur voice on here...it fits the beat well...and I like the theme of it I think ur voice is recognizable Inter, but you're young so it'll probably change some...So, I think you should really develop a trademark flow style or technique in how you deliver your lyrics so that you'll remain recognizable... until then...keep elevatin...ur comin up...jus work on that delivery and/or lyrics in certain lines not a bad track dawg 1 |
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09-17-05, 09:34 AM | #8 | ||
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Thanks man ill work on that.....ill wait to get my own recogonizable flow cos as you said, im quite young so my voice will change (hopefully for the better)
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